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We walked around for a bit, Daisy and Audrey's shirts dried quickly thanks to the sun, and me and
Ryan's umm problem went away eventually.
We went to the tree after we did a few things here and there. Ryan and Audrey sat up in the tree on
a branch making out again, while Daisy and I sat at the trunk, talking.
"Why are they so gross?" Daisy asked.
"Eww cooties!" I said, looking up at them and sticking my tongue out. Ryan flicked me off and kept
drooling all over Audrey.
Daisy giggled. "Seriously, do they ever not have their mouths attached by their tongues?"
"I've never seen it done before unless they're not with each other." I smiled.
"Hey! Shut up, Ollie. Just because you guys think you're too cool to make out in a tree, doesn't
mean that we are." Ryan said.
"Yeah, I've never actually seen you guys do more than kiss." Audrey said.
"Maybe that's 'cause we're more civilized than some people," Daisy called up and stuck her tongue
up at them.
"Put that tongue away, I ain't you're lover," Ryan said with a smirk.
"Good, 'cause I don't even want to know where that tongue has been," Daisy replied.
"Audrey knows," he winked. Audrey turned bright red and slapped him.
"Shut up, Ryan," she said.
I looked at Daisy and we both almost puked.
"That's sick, dude. We really didn't need to know that," I said.
Ryan stuck his tongue out and proceeded to make out with Audrey some more. Daisy took out a sour
gummy worm and dangled it above my head and every time I tilted my head up and tried to bite it,
she'd lift it up. Eventually, she gave up and let me eat it. She looked me innocently and I smiled
and held her hand.
"Hey, my dad's not home tonight, he's going on some business trip or something. I dunno. Wanna come
over?" Daisy asked me.
"Umm I don't know how I'm gunna explain it to Grandma..." I said.
"Just tell her you're coming over my place for the night. We'll all go to Daisy's." Ryan said.
"That works," Daisy said.
That night, after explaining that I was sleeping over Ryan's, I walked to Ryan's house to pick him
up, then to Audrey's, and finally, to Daisy's.
Daisy's house is way bigger than any of our houses. It looked like a mansion compared to grandma's
house but it was really only average sized.
I rang the doorbell and I could hear her running down the stairs. Then there were a few thuds,
followed by an "I'm okay!" and then she finally opened the door breathless.
"Hello everyone," she breathed, then stepped aside and gestured with her hand inside her house. We
all walked in and dropped all our crap next to the front door.
"I heard thuds, are you okay?" I asked her.
"I'm sure we'll all hear thuds tonight," Ryan winked.
"Oh wow, real mature, Ryan," Daisy replied sarcastically. "Yeah, I'm okay. I just fell down the
"Oh God, Daisy," Audrey laughed.
"Thanks. Okay, Audrey and I are sleeping in my room, and Ryan and Ollie will sleep in my brother's
room," she replied.
We walked upstairs to look at the rooms we were going to be sleeping in. Daisy's room has yellow
walls and a white carpet. Her bed was huge- at least a queen- and the comforter had blue and brown
poke-a-dots. There were multiple posters on her walls- three Panic! At the Disco, one My Chemical
Romance, and one Fall Out Boy. There was a small but fat white TV on top of a bookshelf, with all
its shelves filled with books and knickknacks.
"Here is where we're sleeping," Daisy said as Audrey put her stuff down in the corner.
Then we went to the room next to it-her brother's room. The walls were dark blue and the carpet was
black. There was a high-tech computer in the corner on a desk that was covered in papers. All over
the walls were posters of Mario, Zelda, and more video games. There was only one bed and it was very
"Sorry there's only one bed, guys," Daisy said.
"That's okay, baby," I said, putting down my stuff.
"I'm gunna go order pizza then," she said heading out the door and down the stairs followed by
"So who's sleeping on the floor?" Ryan asked.
"What do you mean?" I replied.
"Well there's only one bed and it's tiny. So, who's sleeping on the floor?"
"I'll probably just sneak into Daisy's room in the middle of the night."
"But I was gunna do that!"
"It's my girlfriend's house."
"Yeah but my girlfriend is in there, too. Unless..."
"You're planning to have a threesome aren't you?!"
I pretended to throw up. "Not really. I'd probably just ask Audrey to leave. Then she'd come in
here and you guys can fuck."
He smiled a dumb smile. "Good 'cause I've come prepared" he reached into his bag and pulled out a
box of condoms.
"Really?" I said sarcastically.
"Yep. Want one? I stole them from Ellie's room."
"Have you ever had sex with her?"
I blushed. "That's kind of a personal question, Ryan..."
"I'm you're brother. We're supposed to have each other's backs and know stuff like this. So... have
"Yeah I guess..."
"How do you not know if you've had sex or not?"
"Look, can we just drop the subject please? This is really awkward."
He sighed "Alright. Here. Just take one in case you want to. Or for the future."
I blushed more as I took the condom from his hand. "Okay...thanks I guess."
There was an awkward silence for a few minutes and then we heard the doorbell.
"I got it!" we heard Daisy yell from downstairs.
"Wanna go down?" Ryan asked.
We went downstairs into the kitchen to see Audrey and Daisy eating away at their pizza.
"You guys look like you've never seen food before." Ryan said.
"Well sorry we're so hungry," Audrey said sarcastically.
"It's okay. I'll forgive you," he replied while she rolled her eyes.
We ate, played random games and watched 30 Days of Night before we all went into our rooms at 2
Ryan and I shared a bed which was very awkward. He was squished up against my back and I was curled
up in a ball. He kept breathing down my neck which felt really creepy and he was talking in his
sleep again. This time it was about ducks having a pineapple party or something. I dunno. It was
I felt my phone vibrate in my butt pocket and I think that Ryan did too because his eyes shot open
and he looked at me like I had three heads.
"What the fuck was that." he asked.
I rolled my eyes. "I was just my phone. Take a pill."
I took it out of my pocket and read the text with Ryan reading it over my shoulder.
"Will you fuck off, please?" I asked, irritated.
He stuck his tongue out at me and turned around. I turned my head around to make sure he wasn't
looking and continued to read the text I got from Daisy. She wanted me to meet her in the bathroom.
I thought of a way to get to the bathroom without Ryan getting suspicious and then I felt like a
total blonde when I realized how obvious the answer is.
"Dude. Move, I gotta piss." I said.
He groaned and got out of bed so I could get out. "You suck, y'know that?"
"Yup." I tiptoed to the bathroom as Ryan got back into bed. I was halfway down the hallway when I
realized someone was next to me. I could hear him or her breathing. I think it heard me too because
it stopped moving.
"Who are you?" Audrey asked nervously.
"Oh. Kaythanksbye." she said and kept tiptoeing to my room.
I continued to tiptoe to the bathroom quietly. When I finally got there, the bathroom light was on
and the door was closed. I knocked on it gently and whispered "Daisy?"
"Door's open." she replied. I walked in to see her sitting on the edge of the bathtub in her Hello
Kitty pajamas. I sat next to her quietly.
"You okay?" I asked.
"Mhm. I just missed you." she smiled. "I would've asked you to come to my room but Audrey's still
"Not anymore. She was tiptoeing to my room when I was walking here."
"Oh. Then...let's go to my room."
I blushed. "Okay, sure."
She got up and walked across the hall to her room. I followed her shutting of the bathroom light
She flopped onto her big bed on her stomach and I sat next to her head criss-cross-applesauce.
"Hi." she said looking up at me.
I smiled "hey there."
She sat up in front of me and I looked at her confused. Then she leaned in and kissed me. I kissed
Daisy straddled my waist and pushed me down gently onto the bed, still kissing me. I took off her
shirt and quickly stopped kissing her.
She looked at me confused "What's wrong?"
I blushed. "Umm nothing." I lied, trying to look at her face and not her boobs.
"Is it my kissing? I'm sorry. I knew I was a bad kisser-"
I kissed her before she could finish. "You're an amazing kisser. I'm just...distracted."
"By what?" she looked around her room.
I blushed more "Umm...those..." I poked her boobs.
She blushed. "Oh...they're not that amazing..."
I nodded "Yes they are. They're epic."
She turned bright red "Well...then here." She took off her bra and I stared at her boobs, which
made her giggle. "Are you okay? You look mesmerized." she laughed. In a way, I was mesmerized. Not
by her boobs (don't get me wrong, there was nothing wrong with them) but by the fact that she was
comfortable being with me like this.
"I love you." I blurted out and blushed.
She smiled, "I love you too. I just kinda wish you didn't say that right after I showed you my
"I didn't mean it like that. I don't love you because of the size of your boobs. I love you for who
you are on the inside. And I know how cheesy that sounds but it's true."
She smiled, "I like it when you're cheesy. You're so sweet when you are." she kissed me.
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