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I Won't See You Tonight By shadzlove

  • Chapter-1 - Review This Story!

    She stared at it for the longest time, contemplating about whether she should go or not. "Of course i should go," she whispered to herself. "It's not like he's going to show up."

    Rated: PG-13
    Language: English
    Genre: General > Drama
    Words: 955
    Reviews: 6
    Views: 2001
    Posted: 09/06/2008 03:27:14pm
    Updated: 11/11/2008 10:33:12am
  • Chapter-2 - Review This Story!

    As he climbed into bed, all he could think about was if he should go or not. It wasn't like he was dying to see anybody again. As he drifted off into sleep, there was only one thing on his mind: Unless, of course, she's there.

    Rated: PG-13
    Language: English
    Genre: General > Drama
    Words: 819
    Reviews: 6
    Views: 1675
    Posted: 09/07/2008 10:03:52am
    Updated: 11/11/2008 10:33:25am
  • Chapter-3 - Review This Story!

    Checking over everything one last time, he walked outside and dropped the reply notice into the nearest mailbox. His stomach flipped over a few times as he just made one of the biggest risks of his life.

    Rated: PG-13
    Language: English
    Genre: General > Drama
    Words: 1943
    Reviews: 5
    Views: 1596
    Posted: 09/07/2008 06:30:40pm
    Updated: 06/15/2009 04:19:12am
  • Chapter-4 - Review This Story!

    "Why?" she said trying to hold back the pain. "Miss me after all these years?" And just like that, she stormed out of the hotel and drove away, leaving Brian standing alone.

    Rated: PG-13
    Language: English
    Genre: General > Drama
    Words: 2269
    Reviews: 5
    Views: 1519
    Posted: 09/08/2008 10:19:34am
    Updated: 11/11/2008 10:33:56am
  • Chapter-5 - Review This Story!

    With every word she read, a tear trickled down her face. She quickly closed the book and held it close to her as she cried herself to sleep.

    Rated: PG-13
    Language: English
    Genre: General > Drama
    Words: 1493
    Reviews: 6
    Views: 1522
    Posted: 09/08/2008 05:18:20pm
    Updated: 11/11/2008 10:34:06am
  • Chapter-6 - Review This Story!

    She couldn't just forgive him that easily, but she didn't want to shut him out of her life more than he already had been. Even though she didn't want to admit it, she had missed him terribly and thought about him practically everyday.

    Rated: PG-13
    Language: English
    Genre: General > Drama
    Words: 2316
    Reviews: 6
    Views: 1447
    Posted: 09/09/2008 02:26:42pm
    Updated: 11/11/2008 10:34:19am
  • Chapter-7 - Review This Story!

    She had her hair up in a mess, was wearing blue pajama shorts with a grey 'Jack Daniels' tee, and was the most beautiful creature Brian had laid his eyes on.

    Rated: PG-13
    Language: English
    Genre: General > Drama
    Words: 2814
    Reviews: 5
    Views: 1489
    Posted: 09/10/2008 07:31:06am
    Updated: 11/11/2008 10:34:29am
  • Chapter-8 - Review This Story!

    Nessa shrugged it off as she walked past, brushing her arm up against him as she made her way down the thin hall. This small, unintentional action sent a shiver up and down Brian's body before he followed her back to the living room.

    Rated: PG-13
    Language: English
    Genre: General > Drama
    Words: 2408
    Reviews: 8
    Views: 1544
    Posted: 09/11/2008 07:43:35pm
    Updated: 11/11/2008 10:34:41am
  • Chapter-9 - Review This Story!

    Brian closed the door as soon as Nessa finished. Once it was closed, Nessa hit the door with her fist and sunk down against it, crying uncontrollably. Almost immediately, a very sleepy Jack emerged from his room and approached his mother, sitting down beside her.

    Rated: PG-13
    Language: English
    Genre: General > Drama
    Words: 1726
    Reviews: 5
    Views: 1514
    Posted: 09/13/2008 09:32:26am
    Updated: 11/11/2008 10:34:59am
  • Chapter-10 - Review This Story!

    All he could think about was the fact he had a son. But what bothered him the most was how Nessa had kept it a secret for almost ten years. What was he supposed to do now?

    Rated: PG-13
    Language: English
    Genre: General > Drama
    Words: 2196
    Reviews: 6
    Views: 1506
    Posted: 09/14/2008 09:52:29am
    Updated: 11/11/2008 10:35:10am
  • Chapter-11 - Review This Story!

    She opened the medicine cabinet hoping to find some toothpaste, but something else shoved away in the back caught her eye. She had almost forgotten about putting it there.

    Rated: PG-13
    Language: English
    Genre: General > Drama
    Words: 1403
    Reviews: 5
    Views: 1363
    Posted: 09/15/2008 04:49:37pm
    Updated: 11/11/2008 10:35:21am
  • Chapter-12 - Review This Story!

    As Brian pondered this and blew a puff of smoke into the air, an idea came to him. He immediately dropped his cigarette and began running to her apartment as fast as he could, hoping and praying he was wrong.

    Rated: PG-13
    Language: English
    Genre: General > Drama
    Words: 1754
    Reviews: 5
    Views: 1413
    Posted: 09/16/2008 10:52:58pm
    Updated: 11/11/2008 10:35:33am
  • Chapter-13 - Review This Story!

    She wanted to jump up and ask her if Jack was safe, but her body felt as if she had an enormous weight pressed against her abdomen. She couldn't take this pain. She had no idea where she was and it was starting to scare her.

    Rated: PG-13
    Language: English
    Genre: General > Drama
    Words: 1962
    Reviews: 5
    Views: 1422
    Posted: 09/17/2008 05:21:04pm
    Updated: 11/11/2008 10:35:44am
  • Chapter-14 - Review This Story!

    Things were beginning to get a lot better, but one thing was still on her mind. How was she going to tell Jack that Brian was his father? He’s lived almost a decade without a father and she didn’t know exactly how he was going to take all of this.

    Rated: PG-13
    Language: English
    Genre: General > Drama
    Words: 2366
    Reviews: 5
    Views: 1362
    Posted: 09/18/2008 08:37:25pm
    Updated: 11/11/2008 10:35:57am
  • Chapter-15 - Review This Story!

    “Oh my god, Brian…” She slipped a hand through the bars as she said this and tenderly touched his cheek, rubbing her thumb lightly on his bruised eye.

    Rated: PG-13
    Language: English
    Genre: General > Drama
    Words: 2035
    Reviews: 4
    Views: 1378
    Posted: 09/20/2008 12:08:38pm
    Updated: 11/11/2008 10:36:06am
  • Chapter-16 - Review This Story!

    Nessa quickly looked over at Jack and smiled before turning her attention back to the road. Maybe telling Jack that Brian actually was his father would be easier than she thought.

    Rated: PG-13
    Language: English
    Genre: General > Drama
    Words: 2077
    Reviews: 6
    Views: 1372
    Posted: 09/22/2008 04:49:17pm
    Updated: 11/11/2008 10:36:19am
  • Chapter-17 - Review This Story!

    Okay Ness, you can do this. Just go in there and tell him that Brian is his dad. He has a cool dad, Nessa thought. She took a deep breath and walked into the living room where Jack was watching ‘Spongebob Squarepants’. As she sat down next to him on the couch, she reached for the remote and pressed mute.

    Rated: PG-13
    Language: English
    Genre: General > Drama
    Words: 3081
    Reviews: 6
    Views: 1331
    Posted: 09/24/2008 11:02:45am
    Updated: 11/11/2008 10:36:31am
  • Chapter-18 - Review This Story!

    As he was trying to find Nessa, he couldn’t help but think about why he was so nervous all of a sudden. He didn’t feel like this before, so why was he feeling it now?

    Rated: PG-13
    Language: English
    Genre: General > Drama
    Words: 2470
    Reviews: 5
    Views: 1370
    Posted: 09/26/2008 08:59:15pm
    Updated: 11/11/2008 10:36:43am
  • Chapter-19 - Review This Story!

    The entire time Brian had been meaning to ask Nessa a question, but didn’t know if it was appropriate. Nessa, too, had a question burning inside of her but was afraid to sound hasty or desperate. Through out the dinner, neither one of them even tried to voice the question to the other.

    Rated: PG-13
    Language: English
    Genre: General > Drama
    Words: 2444
    Reviews: 6
    Views: 1406
    Posted: 09/28/2008 07:49:26pm
    Updated: 11/11/2008 10:36:52am
  • Chapter-20 - Review This Story!

    He had to know if there was anything wrong. He had known her long enough to know when something was wrong. Even though he hadn’t been in her life up until recently, things like that don’t just go away, especially when someone makes an impact on you.

    Rated: PG-13
    Language: English
    Genre: General > Drama
    Words: 2439
    Reviews: 7
    Views: 1407
    Posted: 09/29/2008 10:29:22pm
    Updated: 11/11/2008 10:37:03am
  • Chapter-21 - Review This Story!

    It didn’t seem as though his home had been broken into. The only way this person could have gotten into his home was if they had a key, but Brian was the only one who had one. 'Fuck,' he thought when he realized who was in his kitchen. 'I forgot she still had one.'

    Rated: PG-13
    Language: English
    Genre: General > Drama
    Words: 3612
    Reviews: 8
    Views: 1393
    Posted: 10/04/2008 10:30:43am
    Updated: 11/11/2008 10:37:14am
  • Chapter-22 - Review This Story!

    She wanted to hate him for it, but she couldn’t. She was upset and confused and mad at Brian, but she couldn’t hate him. It was impossible to hate him when he spoke such truth. It was impossible to hate the person you loved and wanted to be with.

    Rated: PG-13
    Language: English
    Genre: General > Drama
    Words: 1879
    Reviews: 6
    Views: 1354
    Posted: 10/08/2008 04:33:11pm
    Updated: 11/11/2008 10:37:25am
  • Chapter-23 - Review This Story!

    He wasn’t just going to drop out of her life again, especially because he wanted to be there for Jack. He just wished he could be with Nessa. He had fallen for her all over again. He had fallen for her hard, which made the slight betrayal all the more painful for Brian.

    Rated: PG-13
    Language: English
    Genre: General > Drama
    Words: 3209
    Reviews: 6
    Views: 1391
    Posted: 10/09/2008 11:23:08pm
    Updated: 11/11/2008 10:37:35am
  • Chapter-24 - Review This Story!

    Maybe he should let her calm down a little bit before he went and talked to her? But if he waited too long, would it be too late to bring things back to normal? Brian pondered this and sighed before getting dressed and headed over to her apartment.

    Rated: PG-13
    Language: English
    Genre: General > Drama
    Words: 2460
    Reviews: 6
    Views: 1338
    Posted: 10/12/2008 02:35:11pm
    Updated: 11/11/2008 10:37:47am
  • Chapter-25 - Review This Story!

    Maybe she was still dreaming? But it felt too real to be a dream. Maybe her reality finally was going on the right path. But when she had thought that before, things had gone downhill shortly after.

    Rated: PG-13
    Language: English
    Genre: General > Drama
    Words: 3078
    Reviews: 7
    Views: 1316
    Posted: 10/16/2008 05:34:18pm
    Updated: 11/11/2008 10:38:00am
  • Chapter-26 - Review This Story!

    “Later then?” She turned and looked up at him. Brian had missed so much of her life, of Jack’s life. But now that he was back, he deserved some answers. It was the right thing to do, no matter how hard it would be for Nessa to talk about them. (A/N: na? =naive lol)

    Rated: PG-13
    Language: English
    Genre: General > Drama
    Words: 3203
    Reviews: 7
    Views: 1341
    Posted: 10/21/2008 06:51:25pm
    Updated: 11/11/2008 10:38:11am
  • Chapter-27 - Review This Story!

    Nessa just stood there, unsure of what just happened. Apparently, Val wanted to do some “catching up,” only Nessa wanted to know why this urge of hers came on all of a sudden.

    Rated: PG-13
    Language: English
    Genre: General > Drama
    Words: 2832
    Reviews: 6
    Views: 1300
    Posted: 10/25/2008 10:42:11am
    Updated: 11/11/2008 10:38:21am
  • Chapter-28 - Review This Story!

    "I know you know everything. I know you know about my kid and that Brian’s the father. I also know you know about me being hospitalized and why I was. But what I don’t know is why all of a sudden you show up and want to, quote, catch up."

    Rated: PG-13
    Language: English
    Genre: General > Drama
    Words: 2446
    Reviews: 6
    Views: 1274
    Posted: 10/28/2008 04:46:45pm
    Updated: 11/11/2008 10:38:31am
  • Chapter-29 - Review This Story!

    As soon as she threw her hair up into a ponytail, there was another ring of the doorbell. Again, Nessa ran to the door. As soon as she got there, she took a deep breath and opened the door, revealing the visitor on the other side. “Hello, Vanessa.”

    Rated: PG-13
    Language: English
    Genre: General > Drama
    Words: 3509
    Reviews: 5
    Views: 1321
    Posted: 11/04/2008 02:37:42pm
    Updated: 11/11/2008 10:38:41am
  • Chapter-30 - Review This Story!

    With tears plummeting out of her eyes, Nessa grasped the manila folder her mother had left her, stood up and threw it against the wall. She sunk to the floor and her breathing became heavy and uneven. Brian immediately joined her on the floor and wrapped his arms around her.

    Rated: PG-13
    Language: English
    Genre: General > Drama
    Words: 2634
    Reviews: 5
    Views: 1228
    Posted: 11/07/2008 06:44:25pm
    Updated: 11/11/2008 10:38:52am
  • Chapter-31 - Review This Story!

    She continued looking at her frail appearance, disgusted. Even though she hadn’t touched it months, it looked like she had been on drugs for much longer than that. As she ran her fingers through her hair, she felt an uncomfortable rumbling in the pit of her stomach.

    Rated: PG-13
    Language: English
    Genre: General > Drama
    Words: 1774
    Reviews: 6
    Views: 1193
    Posted: 11/11/2008 10:31:28am
    Updated: 11/11/2008 10:56:15am
  • Chapter-32 - Review This Story!

    Brian pulled his car into the parking lot. Once he turned off the ignition, he turned to Nessa and saw a tear escape her eye. Gently, he wiped it away with his thumb, causing her to turn and face them, an attempted smile on her face.

    Rated: PG-13
    Language: English
    Genre: General > Drama
    Words: 2619
    Reviews: 6
    Views: 1163
    Posted: 11/12/2008 10:58:02pm
    Updated: 11/12/2008 11:03:46pm
  • Chapter-33 - Review This Story!

    Jack sat in between his parents, with Nessa holding his hand tightly. As the judge walked back into the room, Nessa’s heart began beating faster and faster and Brian began bouncing his knee up and down out of nerves.

    Rated: PG-13
    Language: English
    Genre: General > Drama
    Words: 1630
    Reviews: 6
    Views: 1201
    Posted: 11/16/2008 12:34:24pm
    Updated: 11/16/2008 12:37:13pm
  • Chapter-34 - Review This Story!

    She was still having some difficulty forgiving Brian for his blunder that helped lead to the custody outcome. But then again, she knew where he was coming from. She didn’t want him to go off on a tour either, but he had to. It would be too selfish if he didn’t. Nessa just had to accept the fact that this was going to be a difficult relationship, as if it wasn’t one already.

    Rated: PG-13
    Language: English
    Genre: General > Drama
    Words: 3199
    Reviews: 6
    Views: 1187
    Posted: 11/19/2008 10:27:43pm
    Updated: 11/19/2008 10:30:25pm
  • Chapter-35 - Review This Story!

    Brian pulled up in front of the store where Nessa worked. He got out of the car and walked over to the two big glass doors. The sign said they were closed, but he began violently pounding on the door anyway.

    Rated: PG-13
    Language: English
    Genre: General > Drama
    Words: 3198
    Reviews: 6
    Views: 1193
    Posted: 11/22/2008 01:50:49pm
    Updated: 11/22/2008 01:52:39pm
  • Chapter-36 - Review This Story!

    Yeah, Brian was leaving and she wasn’t going to see him for nearly two months, but she knew things were going to be okay. She knew this time was going to be different; Brian was coming back for sure.

    Rated: PG-13
    Language: English
    Genre: General > Drama
    Words: 2868
    Reviews: 6
    Views: 1121
    Posted: 11/25/2008 08:15:21pm
    Updated: 11/25/2008 08:16:13pm
  • Chapter-37 - Review This Story!

    After receiving one last kiss, Nessa pulled out of her parking spot and drove away. As she did so, she looked into her rearview mirror and saw Brian just standing there beside the bus, watching her drive away.

    Rated: PG-13
    Language: English
    Genre: General > Drama
    Words: 3398
    Reviews: 6
    Views: 1146
    Posted: 12/01/2008 05:56:11pm
    Updated: 12/01/2008 05:57:11pm
  • Chapter-38 - Review This Story!

    As soon as she got past the fans, she leaned against the wall and looked into Brian’s face, which was still trying its best to hide behind the door. With a huge grin on his face, Brian grabbed her hand and pulled her backstage.

    Rated: PG-13
    Language: English
    Genre: General > Drama
    Words: 4077
    Reviews: 7
    Views: 1209
    Posted: 12/08/2008 09:39:45pm
    Updated: 12/08/2008 09:40:42pm
  • Chapter-39 - Review This Story!

    “Run!” Brian demanded again. With out asking any more questions, Nessa gripped Jack’s hand tightly and the three began running to Brian’s car as fast as they could.

    Rated: PG-13
    Language: English
    Genre: General > Drama
    Words: 3312
    Reviews: 6
    Views: 1180
    Posted: 12/12/2008 08:25:00pm
    Updated: 12/12/2008 08:26:00pm
  • Chapter-40 - Review This Story!

    Removing her fingers, she noticed blood covered them. She immediately looked down at her leg and saw blood pouring out from it. Disgusted, she looked away only to see Brian about a foot away, lying in a pool of blood.

    Rated: PG-13
    Language: English
    Genre: General > Drama
    Words: 5288
    Reviews: 9
    Views: 1243
    Posted: 12/14/2008 07:27:13pm
    Updated: 12/14/2008 07:28:46pm
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