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AnneMarieh                    (ANONYMOUS) N/A 12/21/2005 08:11:43pm

I'm so glad you finally found your way back to writing, Blkwidow77. You've gained many new fans since your absence, and everywhere that I go, there are old fans talking about when you plan to return. This little story was a great way to wake them all up, they fell asleep waiting... I too fell asleep until I got the email for this story, and I did sorta kinda maybe freak out and place a new hole in my ceiling.

I can tell that your writing has changed because you haven't posted anything in awhile, and that you've been working with your writing style again, because this does seem similar to how you would write Twitch Twitch, yet it also sounds like Rubber Octopus in a way, too.

This story did have a depressed, disappointed undercurrent in it, which I'm guessing is coming from your own innermost feelings and regrets. Sometimes we all wish for things to go back to the way they used to be, when memories were happy and peaceful, but what has happened, happens for a reason, even if we may never know the reason why. I hope you will be recovered enough to continue writing Twitch Twitch. Fans will return in full force for the post of that one.

So have a wonderful Christmas with your family (even if you have to set up a truce with anyone), friends, and eat lots of good food and sweets and hopefully, bad memories about the guy who hurt you will begin to fade, and your wounds will begin to heal. But then again, you can always go to Kurama for some healing herbs, or Yukina. :)

Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year's to ya Spidey!! ^_^

stupidlilfreakgirl17                   (User #1218) N/A 12/21/2005 04:41:22pm

I liked it.kinda sad though.of course probibly wouldnt be as good if it wasnt.hope ya have a happy holiday and good luck with everything thats happened.why do all the guys you write about have that kind of personality?whatever the reason is I like it.

Ensatsu Kokuryu Ha                    (ANONYMOUS) N/A 12/21/2005 12:53:33am

Hey Blkwidow77! Long time no see! I was beginning to wonder if you'd ever write anything again. Or even... if you died or something. Anyway, technically, I can't really blame you for not writing anything all this time, I haven't written anything for a year before just recently. Though, I have yet to decide whether I feel like posting my sad crap on the internet. It's very interesting... despite this being a different story, the two characters really sound like Hiei and reader in Twitch Twitch. If I didn't know better, I'd think this was the next chapter of Twitch Twitch based on the two characters personalities alone. It's quite amazing though, that I still love YYH even after all these years. I mean I also like Bleach and Naruto now, but Yu Yu Hakusho, still has that special place in my favorite anime. I really enjoyed your story. True, I don't personaly take to romance stories, however yours is one of my... VERY few acceptions. I guess it's just because of this more dark romance stories that you write and your detail and choice of words that it just pulls me into this world of words you created, that makes me so intrigued. Well, I probably need not say this, but please hurry and continue with Twitch Twitch! It's been so long since I've read such a good story.

Hakkyou Kaosu                   (User #1393) N/A 12/18/2005 11:38:16pm

Wow. That was magnificent. I should have known, should have fully expected something so great from you. Yet still, I find myself amazed. I swear I got a little teary-eyed in the middle, and near the end. Only you have the talent to imbue so much emotion into a story.
I hope you recover. I cannot say I know your pain, and nor will I say that I understand how you feel. Each pain is different. But I do offer support if you need it, if you would accept it.
This story was a definite favorite. Please continue to write, you truly have the talent for it.
Hope all is well, and no worries.
Ha-chan

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