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Part #41 - Chapter Fourty
MidnightFantasy                   (User #2526) N/A 06/13/2006 06:45:03am

i really loved your story. great one!

beneath_the_lies                   (User #1502) N/A 02/23/2006 04:02:29pm

Ahhh... Its over? I thought it was a good ending! That was definitely one of the best chapters in the story. I could go off like Grace on all the things I liked, but I wont, Can vases really fly? lol. :D You definitely need to do a sequel or write a new story. So get to it! lol
~Mel~

Part #41 - Chapter Fourty
natalie                   (User #1786) N/A 02/21/2006 04:13:47am

this story was too good to end but i'll deal with it

i loved it and the ending did not suck at all

it was friggin awesome

I'm_Still_Here                   (User #1554) N/A 02/20/2006 03:24:30pm

YAY i had a baby but i tole you to make sure it looked like her father..LOL yeah i tataly cried cause i didn't want it to end i was like NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! NOT FAIR!!! you toatly have to put that other story up, the one that you showed me with taylor and yeah you know what i'm talking about! i think you should do a sequel so we know how my little one is doing and if her daddy really shres the stage but if he doesn't i will have to smack him... and he be sleepin on the coach for a wile...no i wouldnt do that to someone that hot...lol yeah you know what i'm talking about. so yeah i totaly want you to put up another story cause i love your writing and yeah, ok the dinosurs slippers thing, I LOVED IT, that was great, and yes i do have a really strong grip i am mad strong lol i would go through every little part of the chapter i loved but it would take to long cause i loved IT ALL!!!!! so you have to write more!
Lerve yas
Kris

deepinsideimbleeding                   (User #1750) N/A 02/20/2006 10:02:48am

Psshhht that was so not a sucky ending!! You have issues.
That was sooo good. Oh, by the way, this is Kait. I'm just under Lexi's thingy cuz I'm at her house... Yeah.

Anywho... THAT WAS SO AWESOME!!!

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Woo!! I'm going on tour with Simple Plan!! WITH MY BASS!! Wait... Well in the story I was w/ them anyway but ya know...

I think Lexi also wants to kill me cuz I took Seb from her... And she also wants to... Be your friend... cuz you're REALLY COOL. But yeah.... Do you even know who Lexi is? Well if you don't, NOW YOU DO!!!! Kinda.

WELL ANYWAY.......... (thats right, I'm still NOT DONE)

CHUCK AND JACK ARE FINALLY GETTING MARRIED... Took em long enough... Really.

And awwww, Emily Hope. Woah... THATS MY COUSINS NAME. Freaky. And yea, I just realized this. What? She lives in like, Ireland... Wait no... She lives like.. OH I DONT KNOW!! I just know I have a cousin named Emily Hope... And then some last name that I don't know... Hehhh...

Yeah anyway... I LOVEEEDDD IT.

Now post that other one where I am with David... Because I like David. :) :) :) A lot.

And Lexi wants to know if it is at all possible for her to be with dear Sebastien. Yeah. You might want to oblige... She may maim you with a rubber penguin or duck or something... Rubber that she can maim you with...

Okaybye!!

Gracie                   (User #1733) N/A 02/20/2006 05:04:23am

OMG THAT WAS ABSOLUTELY FREAKING AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! btw that was NOT a sucky ending it was perfect!!!!!!

im doing my quote thing so this will probably be a huge review (just like the other one lmao) so im apoligising now..... sorry!

Quote 1. I knew that she couldn't just cross her legs until she wanted to start giving birth, but a guy's got to hope.

lmao run pierre run!

Quote 2. I have no idea if it was traffic gods or what but I made it to the hospital in record time.

THANKYOU TRAFFIC GODS!!!!!

Quote 3. “Right now? That girl is high off gas, she'd let anyone in.”

lmao i laughed pretty darn hard when i read that!

Quote 4. “Oh my god.” Jack yelled as I screamed

kris must have a pretty strong grip! lol

Quote 5. “Like I'm about to squeeze a watermelon through a pea sized hole.”

oh god i never wanna give birth now ive read that!

Quote 6. “Were is that gas?” I asked looking around the room

c'mon ppl give the girl some gas!

Quote 7. “Who cares. I just want to know what he's going to name the kid.” David practically yelled out

a bit impatient you think? lmao

Quote 8. “Dude you need new slippers.” I said kicking his dinosaur slippers he always wears on trips.

David looked hurt. “They have feelings you know.” He said.

“They look like they're alive.” Jeff said shaking his head.

omg i used to have those slipper when i was little!!

Quote 9. “Think he's going to be asking some questions? Because I don't think he's got Jack another puppy.”

Well lets hope its not another puppy, but could it be a cat??? nah hes goona propose!!! YAY!!!

Quote 10. The little bundle of joy not even five minutes old and here I was thinking she was the most beautiful thing, and she wasn't mine.

who wouldnt???

Quote 11. “She had the baby.” Grace said smiling.

yep thats me the understater of the year! lol

Quote 12. “Ah ha. In your face Jeff.” Sam said. “You owe me twenty.”

hahaha sucked in Jeff

Quote 13. “He came running over to us screaming. `It's a Girl, It's a Girl.'” Grace added also laughing.

i can imagine pierre running out of the hospital and skipping around and screaming! pretty funny images in my head at the moment.

Quote 14. David sighed. “What's her name?” He asked.

“Still David?” Casey asked laughing. “They will let us know.”

“But I want to know.” David complained.

Calm Down Davey boy, if you really wanted to make up baby names you and casey should have a kid, wait no forget i said that, we dont want any little davids or little caseys running around

Quote 15. “It's fine.” Jack said moving her head out of Chuck's reach. “I ran into something. That's all.”

Pierre scoffed. “Yea, a flying vase.”

can u run into a flying vase???? that would definately make funnist home video show!!!

Quote 16. “Imagine us doing a bad boys two on the poor guy who takes kiddo out on a date.” I said.

hahahaha i can def imagine that!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Quote 17. “This is a hospital not an amusement park.” She said

pfft shes obviously blind, its not a hospital, its an amusement park....duh!

Quote 18. "If I was you. I'd hope that nurse never has to give you a needle of some sort."

my friend wants to be a nurse/GP and shes going to love stabbing me with needles anyway thats beyond the point, (just so you know im going to start slowing down on the quotes a bit coz its already really long!)

Quote 19. “Thank god she doesn't look like her father.” Jeff added smiling.

ohhhh y not, pierres hot remember!!

Quote 20. “Good, you didn't steal my name.” Grace said smiling. “I would have kill you if you took Al, or Karlie for that matter.” (AN - come on, my name had to be in there some where! Grace I added Al for ya! HA)

good! you deserve to have ur name in it! and Al rox!!!! lmao

Quote 21. “Don't you ruin it.” Sam joked. “I broke a nail for this wall.”

jeez thanx so much for trusting me! lmao jokes

Quote 22. Where it was just the guys on stage before, now beside Pierre tugging on his pants was a little picture of a two-year-old wanting to share the stage with her father.

“It wouldn't surprise me if that will happen you know.” Kait said admiring the finished job.

“Question is, will Dad share with her?” Casey asked laughing.

Course he will, shes gonna be a daddys girl! and a mummys girl and an uncles girl and an aunties girl! lmao and even if Pierre doesnt want her on stage because he thinks it will be too dangerous shell find a way on with the help of her uncles.

Quote 23. “I've been asked to join a band playing bass guitar.” I said excited

Yay, well done kait!

Quote 24. I took a deep breath. It was time. “Jacinta Moore. Will you marry me?” I asked opening the box to reveal a white gold engagement ring with a princess cut diamond in between two smaller diamonds in the band.

OMG wow!!! SAY YES JACK!!!!!

Quote 25. Jack nodded. “Yes. I'll marry you.” She said.


I couldn't contain it any more. I pulled her towards me as we kissed.

YAY!!!!!! LETS GO CELEBRATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Quote 26. Chuck proposed.” Kait said smiling.

"To you?” Casey asked Kait.

“No. Me.” Jack said waving her ring around.

omg kc, yeh secretly hes with kait, uh no he proposed to jack, lmao kc

Quote 27. David and Casey, still the wild pair of the group, are currently in the process of producing and hosting a new TV show for MTV. They wouldn't tell us what they have planned because they are trying to find ways to get us involved.

oh my god everybody hide!!!!!

Quote 28. I couldn't believe that I was lucky enough to have this group of people as my best friends. You never got sick of them, you could always count on them, and they were always there. No matter what life threw at us, or how quick the pace was, we would face it front on together.

EXACTLY!!!!! FRIENDS FOREVA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

well theres my review, and i think its the biggest review in review history but hey you deserve it!

LUB YA!!!!
Gracie

p.s. i just checked how many words i wrote and guess wat? 1,086 words! and im supposed to be doing my modern history homework. anywayz lub ya

Gracie                   (User #1733) N/A 02/20/2006 04:56:31am

OMG THAT WAS ABSOLUTELY FREAKING AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! btw that was NOT a sucky ending it was perfect!!!!!!

im doing my quote thing so this will probably be a huge review (just like the other one lmao) so im apoligising now..... sorry!

Quote 1. I knew that she couldn't just cross her legs until she wanted to start giving birth, but a guy's got to hope.

lmao run pierre run!

Quote 2. I have no idea if it was traffic gods or what but I made it to the hospital in record time.

THANKYOU TRAFFIC GODS!!!!!

Quote 3. “Right now? That girl is high off gas, she'd let anyone in.”

lmao i laughed pretty darn hard when i read that!

Quote 4. “Oh my god.” Jack yelled as I screamed

kris must have a pretty strong grip! lol

Quote 5. “Like I'm about to squeeze a watermelon through a pea sized hole.”

oh god i never wanna give birth now ive read that!

Quote 6. “Were is that gas?” I asked looking around the room

c'mon ppl give the girl some gas!

Quote 7. “Who cares. I just want to know what he's going to name the kid.” David practically yelled out

a bit impatient you think? lmao

Quote 8. “Dude you need new slippers.” I said kicking his dinosaur slippers he always wears on trips.

David looked hurt. “They have feelings you know.” He said.

“They look like they're alive.” Jeff said shaking his head.

omg i used to have those slipper when i was little!!

Quote 9. “Think he's going to be asking some questions? Because I don't think he's got Jack another puppy.”

Well lets hope its not another puppy, but could it be a cat??? nah hes goona propose!!! YAY!!!

Quote 10. The little bundle of joy not even five minutes old and here I was thinking she was the most beautiful thing, and she wasn't mine.

who wouldnt???

Quote 11. “She had the baby.” Grace said smiling.

yep thats me the understater of the year! lol

Quote 12. “Ah ha. In your face Jeff.” Sam said. “You owe me twenty.”

hahaha sucked in Jeff

Quote 13. “He came running over to us screaming. `It's a Girl, It's a Girl.'” Grace added also laughing.

i can imagine pierre running out of the hospital and skipping around and screaming! pretty funny images in my head at the moment.

Quote 14. David sighed. “What's her name?” He asked.

“Still David?” Casey asked laughing. “They will let us know.”

“But I want to know.” David complained.

Calm Down Davey boy, if you really wanted to make up baby names you and casey should have a kid, wait no forget i said that, we dont want any little davids or little caseys running around

Quote 15. “It's fine.” Jack said moving her head out of Chuck's reach. “I ran into something. That's all.”

Pierre scoffed. “Yea, a flying vase.”

can u run into a flying vase???? that would definately make funnist home video show!!!

Quote 16. “Imagine us doing a bad boys two on the poor guy who takes kiddo out on a date.” I said.

hahahaha i can def imagine that!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Quote 17. “This is a hospital not an amusement park.” She said

pfft shes obviously blind, its not a hospital, its an amusement park....duh!

Quote 18. "If I was you. I'd hope that nurse never has to give you a needle of some sort."

my friend wants to be a nurse/GP and shes going to love stabbing me with needles anyway thats beyond the point, (just so you know im going to start slowing down on the quotes a bit coz its already really long!)

Quote 19. “Thank god she doesn't look like her father.” Jeff added smiling.

ohhhh y not, pierres hot remember!!

Quote 20. “Good, you didn't steal my name.” Grace said smiling. “I would have kill you if you took Al, or Karlie for that matter.” (AN - come on, my name had to be in there some where! Grace I added Al for ya! HA)

good! you deserve to have ur name in it! and Al rox!!!! lmao

Quote 21. “Don't you ruin it.” Sam joked. “I broke a nail for this wall.”

jeez thanx so much for trusting me! lmao jokes

Quote 22. Where it was just the guys on stage before, now beside Pierre tugging on his pants was a little picture of a two-year-old wanting to share the stage with her father.

“It wouldn't surprise me if that will happen you know.” Kait said admiring the finished job.

“Question is, will Dad share with her?” Casey asked laughing.

Course he will, shes gonna be a daddys girl! and a mummys girl and an uncles girl and an aunties girl! lmao and even if Pierre doesnt want her on stage because he thinks it will be too dangerous shell find a way on with the help of her uncles.

Quote 23. “I've been asked to join a band playing bass guitar.” I said excited

Yay, well done kait!

Quote 24. I took a deep breath. It was time. “Jacinta Moore. Will you marry me?” I asked opening the box to reveal a white gold engagement ring with a princess cut diamond in between two smaller diamonds in the band.

OMG wow!!! SAY YES JACK!!!!!

Quote 25. Jack nodded. “Yes. I'll marry you.” She said.


I couldn't contain it any more. I pulled her towards me as we kissed.

YAY!!!!!! LETS GO CELEBRATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Quote 26. Chuck proposed.” Kait said smiling.

"To you?” Casey asked Kait.

“No. Me.” Jack said waving her ring around.

omg kc, yeh secretly hes with kait, uh no he proposed to jack, lmao kc

Quote 27. David and Casey, still the wild pair of the group, are currently in the process of producing and hosting a new TV show for MTV. They wouldn't tell us what they have planned because they are trying to find ways to get us involved.

oh my god everybody hide!!!!!

Quote 28. I couldn't believe that I was lucky enough to have this group of people as my best friends. You never got sick of them, you could always count on them, and they were always there. No matter what life threw at us, or how quick the pace was, we would face it front on together.

EXACTLY!!!!! FRIENDS FOREVA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

well theres my review, and i think its the biggest review in review history but hey you deserve it!

LUB YA!!!!
Gracie

p.s. i just checked how many words i wrote and guess wat? 1,086 words! and im supposed to be doing my modern history homework. anywayz lub ya

Danielle Luckey                   (User #1781) N/A 02/19/2006 11:53:19pm

HEY MY NAME HOPE WAS IN IT KOOL. AWESOME AMAZING BRAVO! I LUVED THE STORY CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEW ONE U GOT BREWING!

Alannah                    (ANONYMOUS) N/A 02/19/2006 08:27:47pm

AWWWWW This story ended soo good! im glad jack and kris made up! aww can i be in ur next fic please?? ive never been in a fic here before let alone any one anywhere else. Love alannah

Part #40 - Chapter Thirty Nine
Gracie                    (ANONYMOUS) N/A 02/14/2006 09:57:54pm

omg omg omg omg i have nothing anything else to say! lmao

UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!
Lub Ya
Gracie

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