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Part #2 - Chapter 1: The Hall Pass
MaryAmbrose                   (User #11479) N/A 05/24/2013 07:03:57pm

LOVED this!
What I wouldn't give to be in her shoes...
I don't think I could ever do what Val had done. Great story!

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Built For Syn                   (User #8500) N/A 05/06/2013 11:09:58am

Ah, I love what you write!
I noticed you've written a sequel so I'm eager to read it! I wonder if Val will
meet Beka, or if there will be a baby involved.

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Built For Syn                   (User #8500) N/A 05/06/2013 11:03:08am

Ooooh, this is great! I can't wait to see where you take this!

MissyGunnerVengeance                   (User #9036) N/A 05/03/2013 06:14:23pm

I so love this!

Charlie_Lavigne                   (User #11243) N/A 04/28/2013 06:16:57am

i sooooooooooo loved this!! it was perfect im so happy to
see there is a sequel!! ::doing happy dance:: im sure this
is gonna be one of my new favorites :), i loved rhiannon
she seems so...relatable,normal, even though i would have
not been able to talk on her shoes hahaha. A character that
feels real + a surreal situation, wonderful mix of course!
I cant wait to go trough the rest as long as i have some
time off, i want to take my time to read it or maybe just
torture myself a bit and dwelling a bit on each chapter
hehehee who knows, ok ill stop my i-just-read-something-
awesome rambling :). great work as usual.


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resyn                   (User #10795) N/A 04/21/2013 07:02:19pm

You can't blame the man for doing what you told him to do. If
she couldn't handle it she never should have brought it up.
She should really just be thankful that now his commitment to
her is even stronger and make sure she keeps her man
satisfied instead of worrying so much about her satisfaction.
Now he knows whats out there...

kat.vengeance                   (User #6012) N/A 04/21/2013 03:39:19am

I knew you couldn't leave it at that! Great chapter! I wonder if He's going
to look for her..

AngelStarr                   (User #11049) N/A 04/20/2013 08:43:12pm

OMG another part!
I loved it, Valary had no right to ask.. She gave him that hall pass! Matt likes Rhia a little bit, that was expected..
I wonder what will happen to their marrige when Rhia enters the picture in a bigger way..

Xx Angel

Mich                   (User #10749) N/A 04/20/2013 07:51:56am

I can't wait to see what
happens when they meet.
Thanks for continuing :)

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Aynsley                   (User #11424) N/A 04/20/2013 04:49:55am

Really enjoyed this, can't wait to see the rest! X

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