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Part #4 - Chapter 3: Little Miss Chatterbox
Built For Syn                   (User #8500) N/A 07/20/2013 09:07:02pm

Hello there! Oh how I have missed your stories! I love the plot for this one,
the chapters have been great. Such an interesting character who is
difficult to warm to because of her upper class attitude. Engaged after a
month seems crazy but I guess it's the lifestyle. And Brian's little kid is the
cutest but its clear that there is going to be some drama coming up
between the two girls. Really interesting plot line overall and I can't wait
for you to develop the story further and see which direction you take this!
Always a fan, Built For Syn x

Lady Insane                   (User #9751) N/A 06/12/2013 02:58:10pm

I'm not a fan of children either, but I
don't like how she's trying to hint at
shipping ff his kid. And she's a gold
digger. I wanted to like her, but I can't :(

Part #3 - Chapter 2: Life Is Full Of Surprises
Avenged_FoREVer                   (User #10889) N/A 06/02/2013 04:58:13pm

Aww! I love this story! Can't wait for an update!

marshall eriksen                   (User #11231) N/A 05/30/2013 10:47:29pm

Ah, love :) This chapter was amazing! I'm really happy with the story line
so far and it's great that Brian wants her to meet his daughter, but I can't
help but feeling like this isn't going to end well...

Can't wait for the next chapter!! :D

Lady Insane                   (User #9751) N/A 05/29/2013 02:36:58pm

He's in love! And he wants her to meet his child, but I don't
know how she's going to take it.

AngelStarr                   (User #11049) N/A 05/26/2013 08:31:57pm

That was great, loving where the story is going!
Can't wait for more!

Xx Angel

Part #2 - Chapter 1: Meeting The Right Millionaire
Lady Insane                   (User #9751) N/A 05/19/2013 11:11:49pm

I want the drama!

Avenged_FoREVer                   (User #10889) N/A 05/17/2013 03:50:48pm

I like the idea of this story. Can't wait to read more! :)

marshall eriksen                   (User #11231) N/A 05/17/2013 12:57:03am

I'm so excited for this already! :D

Built For Syn                   (User #8500) N/A 05/06/2013 02:26:23pm

This sounds amazing! And yes, I'm back and so excited to catch up on
what you've been writing. I've missed your excellent stories. I'm looking
forward to you posting the first chapter of this.

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