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Part #18 - Chapter 17- Just Getting Older, Not Getting Over You
AngelStarr                   (User #11049) N/A 07/24/2013 03:48:00am

Emotional chapter, why did he sleep with Val? He hates her..
Always loving your updates :)

Xx Angel

Part #17 - Chapter 16- Won't Let Myself Believe That What We Feel's A Sin
AngelStarr                   (User #11049) N/A 07/24/2013 03:16:50am

Legal or not legal, love is love.
Great chapter, they'll find their way back to eachother.

Xx Angel

Part #18 - Chapter 17- Just Getting Older, Not Getting Over You
arreisvengeance                   (User #8791) N/A 07/23/2013 05:07:21am

Wow , I didn't think it could possibly get any worse, but here we are. He
committed the ultimate act of treason! Like seriously, VAL?! Out of all the
people that were probably around when he was drunk! Now she has the
ability to fake a pregnancy! And bay could be pregnant! The plot thickens!

Part #17 - Chapter 16- Won't Let Myself Believe That What We Feel's A Sin
arreisvengeance                   (User #8791) N/A 07/23/2013 04:55:32am

Noooo! Completely unacceptable! D: they're supposed to be forever,
illegal or not! :( and after all the help she put in for his band, and the fact
that they still had sex even when it hurt her! Hopefully this will be fixed.
Great chapter, albeit a sad one

Part #18 - Chapter 17- Just Getting Older, Not Getting Over You
Built For Syn                   (User #8500) N/A 07/21/2013 12:12:40pm

No! How could Matt sleep with Val?! Stupid boy! And Val is still a crazy
psycho, presuming she is Matts girlfriend! I thought the part when Matt
and Bayleigh met up was really funny because of Justin's comments and
also Jimmy referring to Bay as Wifey and 'Operation Wifey' was hilarious!
I'm still angry that Matt slept with Val. It was cute how his mom was
encouraging Matt to marry Bayleigh of that's what he wanted. I definitely
think Bayleigh will get pregnant after Matt's condom broke. I really don't
want her to though, she's only fifteen and I want her to have time to grow
up and sort her life with Matt out before they have kids... I hope she
doesn't! Update soon, I live this story!

Part #17 - Chapter 16- Won't Let Myself Believe That What We Feel's A Sin
Built For Syn                   (User #8500) N/A 07/18/2013 03:15:32pm

Oh no! Matt needs to come back to her, they need each other! Although it
is so hard for him trying to resist her when he wants her so much, but
poor heartbroken Bayleigh! Great chapter, I can't wait for more of your
brilliant writing!

Part #16 - Chapter 15- So In Love That You Act Insane
Built For Syn                   (User #8500) N/A 07/18/2013 03:03:12pm

Aw I hope it gets better for Bay! And I wish val would just go away!

Part #15 - Chapter 14- Not So Innocent
Built For Syn                   (User #8500) N/A 07/18/2013 02:53:37pm

Ah he gave in! And she is fourteen!
I think someone will get pregnant! And I think Brian likes Brie! I love this
story, it's great!

Part #14 - Chapter 13- K.I.S.S.I.N.G.
Built For Syn                   (User #8500) N/A 07/18/2013 02:42:07pm

As wow, for having her very first kiss to losing her virginity! A lot for Brie,
and she was so excited to kiss Matt that its easy to feel really sorry for
her, wanting Matt when he wants Bay... And I can't believe Val! She's a bit
psycho! I wonder what will happen now with Bay and Matt!

Part #12 - Chapter 11- Patience Is A Virtue (We Don't Want To Learn)
Built For Syn                   (User #8500) N/A 07/18/2013 02:27:50pm

Oops I mean Bay! Haha

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