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P.B.Darkside                   (User #10946) N/A 02/23/2013 02:32:53am

"There were some extravagant pieces that looked like they
required eight hands instead of two to even get into them, some
that left very little to the imagination, and some that were
downright weird." I loved this line. You really have a beautiful way
with words and it really brings the story to life. Once again I felt
like I was right there with her in the lingerie shop and then
watching like a fly on the wall in the basement.

It's horrible that she went thru all that trouble and couldn't get
Brian in the mood. It's even sadder that they're not having any fun
trying to make a baby, because we all know half the fun is in
getting there.

Lady Insane                   (User #9751) N/A 02/16/2013 03:19:12am

He's my favorite man, but I hate him so much
right now. She's obviously trying to make
things work, and he doesn't care at all. What
an ass!

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