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Wow, this story really tugs at the heartstrings.
You're an amazing writer, Amy! I love your
description and use of words. I felt like I was
there with them the whole time.
It's really sad that they're not getting what
they want most. But I almost feel like they shouldn't
have a baby, at least not together, if there's
no love left between them. But I guess they're
confident that if they have a baby everything will
go back to the way it was. I hope so for their sake.
I'm glad you're back! I missed this story so much! It was
oh so bittersweet and depressing. I love the dynamic between
the broken couple, and the lack of a baby is tearing them up
so bad. You should hurry and upload the next installment
because I just can't wait.
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