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*~TheRevsGirl~*                   (User #11272) N/A 01/28/2013 12:55:40am

Yay an update!!!! Lol please please please let Shads and Rhiannon be
together?? I think u should take it there if Matt W is so unsure and
doesn't trust her completely. Update soon please!!!

StephyyGates.xo                   (User #9670) N/A 01/19/2013 01:37:39pm

Loved this chapter!! Major high 5's dude!! Update soon, please?

Liars And Monsters                   (User #9568) N/A 01/19/2013 05:22:21am

I can see this going bad verry quick seeing as the green eyed monster has taken hold with M.W already.Maybe Shads sees that the kids are more Important. I can't wait to see what's next!
L&M

resyn                   (User #10795) N/A 01/18/2013 09:39:59pm

Ok, I am so glad I waited on this. I really needed this with everything that has been happening... I needed this. I adored it. Poor sweet little Owen, and Shadz stepping up to the plate. I can still feel the currents between them I won't lie although I would love for it to work out with Matt... I just feel that it's still there for Shadz. The mix of kids is a massive mess though. I like the emotion here.

Avenged_FoREVer                   (User #10889) N/A 01/18/2013 03:41:12am

So glad that Owen is ok! I really want to see her end back up with Shads. I
like them together. Can't wait til next chapter!
~Brianna~

MissSanders82                   (User #11290) N/A 01/17/2013 09:51:09pm

Could i please read this story. Sounds awesome :)

Meagan_Mayehm                   (User #11124) N/A 01/17/2013 09:48:48pm

I'm glad Owen is okay! I would have cried if he wasn't. Val
is a heartless bitch!!!!
I think she needs to go be with Shadz. I love Matt and
everything its just Shadz is just so... UGHH!

Mich                   (User #10749) N/A 01/17/2013 07:31:38am

I am so glad Owen is ok! Thanks for only having one
Matt in this chapter, it would have been pretty
confusing otherwise. Thanks for updating :)

moneclover                   (User #7752) N/A 01/17/2013 06:20:14am

Oh my gosh, I didn't hate the characters AT ALL in this
chapter! Kudos, lady!

This line legitimately made me tear up! “Whatever you do,
don't regret him, or he'll grow up hating the fact that
neither one of you seems to really want him. You want our
children, and Valary only wanted him to try keep you.”

I seriously got misty eyed!

And this... this made me giggle. Rhiannon would just tell
Matt that he was being jealous, insecure and irrational and
Matt would tell her that she was being insensitive and how
could she spend so much time with a man she'd continually
fallen in to bed with even when he was with another woman
and what was to stop her now?

It's hilarious because it rings true. I was like, "I feel
like she plucked that from my brain!" If I were in his
shoes, I'd be BEYOND suspicious... but I hope he turns out
to be wrong. Fingers crossed.

And YAY for choosing to take out their frustrations in bed
instead of fighting. LOVE THAT!

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