I'm sure I've read this before, but somehow didn't review, sorry. Uhm, barely makes sense, but you said it will so I'm willing to wait for it to do just so. I love your stories and I'm positive this one will be really amazing.
I can only guess who will make an impact on her life...
I'm aware I don't know anything of Eddie's character, but trouble is coming if you ask me.
You asked us to tell you whether you should continue or not, and you have my vote to definitely continue!