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Part #11 - Chapter Ten- I Can't Decide If It's A Choice, Getting Swept Away
LisaShadz                   (User #10869) N/A 10/17/2013 10:52:27pm

I love this.........please keep writing

Synderella                   (User #11209) N/A 04/06/2013 03:13:43am

Super hotness. LOVE!

Part #11 - Chapter Ten- I Can't Decide If It's A Choice, Getting Swept Away
moneclover                   (User #7752) N/A 03/31/2013 12:27:52pm

She supposed though, that it was as good a way as any to
justify an extra-marital affair. `Honey, I'm sorry, but I
don't remember you.'

Lol. I died. That's perfect.

And oh my god, he's like an animal! I LOVE IT!!!

I am really apprehensive about what happens when they
finally get to his people (Lol. Like he's a lost dog.) and
if he actually remembers them. But, of course, I'm stoked!

Perfection, as usual.

resyn                   (User #10795) N/A 03/30/2013 12:19:24am

And life as they know it is about to change.... Damn they are hot! Can't wait to see how this goes with getting to Brie and preparing to face everyone he doesn't even remember, including the Mrs.

Synderella                   (User #11209) N/A 03/27/2013 08:33:52pm

This is def one of my top faves of your stories on here. I like this re-write a lot. Always leaves ya wanting more.

Part #11 - Chapter Ten- I Can't Decide If It's A Choice, Getting Swept Away
arreisvengeance                   (User #8791) N/A 03/27/2013 04:47:19pm

Awh they're so cute! I almost forgot that he was in danger, so I was
confused for a bit. I'm kind of really sad though- their time together is
coming to a close :( will he remember, or will he leave his life for her?!
The question is driving me mad! Update soon lovely! :)

Liars And Monsters                   (User #9568) N/A 03/27/2013 01:27:29am

He's a beast I say!
Damn the inner voice need's a vacation. there I said it, I know she has to remember that he has a life he forgot but ...well live a little.

Now to see what cali unfolds and to see if the family will try to keep them apart?
Update soon
L&M

Part #10 - Chapter Nine- I'll Do Anything You Say, If You Say It With Your Hands
moneclover                   (User #7752) N/A 03/10/2013 03:04:56am

I don't even know... I just... I can't... Like...

I feel like I should've waited to review until I could MAKE
A COHERENT SENTENCE BUT I CAN'T, DUDE!!!

FINALLY!! FINALLY!!!

SO MANY EXCLAMATION POINTS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

That was insanely, stupidly, awesomely, ridiculously HOT!
And well worth the wait. FINALLY!! She CAVED!! GAH!!

I just...

Whoa.

Matt the almost-virgin. I cannot even.

PERFECTION!!

arreisvengeance                   (User #8791) N/A 03/08/2013 06:57:35am

Dear god FINALLY! Their sexual tension was so intense I almost died. It's
like Christmas came early! Great chapter babe (even though it was quite
graphic... Heh... Normally I don't read sex scenes, if you couldn't tell x) )
can't wait for more! :)

*~TheRevsGirl~*                   (User #11272) N/A 03/07/2013 05:20:01pm

haha he finally got it XD nice chapter. i kept giggling every
time i thought of Matt as a virgin... update soon please :)

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