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Part #6 - Chapter 5 - Search Endlessly
Liars And Monsters                   (User #9568) N/A 11/30/2012 03:41:32pm

Ohhh hell i knew it wouldn't be a problem for long! now Matt ,Jihnny & Arin need to think and get the other 3 off thier Ass for a day or so And Jimmy Need's to figure out how to protect and keep Kennabecause something tells me that Brina has re-enforcements in the works. Matt's Team Needs Friends and fast.
PLEASE update soon
L&M

moneclover                   (User #7752) N/A 11/30/2012 03:34:59pm

That was a lot for one chapter. I feel bad for Brian, but at
the same time... he's kind of a piece of shit in this, so I
guess it's just karma.

YAY MASH!!!

Part #5 - Chapter 4 - The Chance Is There If You Want It All That Bad
xxUnholyConfessionsxx                   (User #10832) N/A 11/30/2012 01:02:46am

Why not? Go for it with Johnny and Arin, ... I absolutely love Jimmy in
this :) and poor Syn but he shouldn't be trying to kill Matt and Kenna :P

xxUnholyConfessionsxx                   (User #10832) N/A 11/30/2012 01:02:15am

Why not? Go for it with Johnny and Arin, ... I absolutely love Jimmy in
this :) and poor Syn but he shouldn't be trying to kill Matt and Kenna :P

moneclover                   (User #7752) N/A 11/29/2012 11:17:38pm

First of all, when you said "There will be more MASH" I was
STOKED!! And I say go for it with the Johnny and Arin
thing. Like Ashley, I'm not necessarily sure that's a
pairing I would think of, but they could be adorable!

Poor Brian. He's just all fucked up. First he gets
poisoned, then he nearly dies, and now he's blind? That's
so sad.

I don't know how I feel about Jimmy being able to
shapeshift... that was kind of weird, and I definitely
didn't see it coming. But it was definitely creepy.

Jimmy and Kenna are adorable. The thing about her long hair
reminded me of Twilight, though. The masking of the scent
thing. But they're SO HOT!

Ex&Oh                   (User #5929) N/A 11/29/2012 10:32:03pm

I thought I had a bad day yesterday... then poor Syn.
Fucking poisoned and blinded. I can say THAT didn't happen,
so that's nifty.

Tugging at the heart strings with Syn at the end. What a
bummer.

I can't wait for more MASH, I can't deny! :P

Also, about the Johnny and Arin deal.... I mean, it's
whatever, it's your story. I'm just not into that pairing
at all. Does nothing for me. But maybe you could make it
work.

On a different note, the next update should come soon
because I'm anxious to read more! :D

-Ash

Avenged_FoREVer                   (User #10889) N/A 11/29/2012 08:08:49pm

Syn has had a pretty shitty day. Being poisoned then going blind. Im sure
they might figure out something. And for the Johnny and Arin as a couple
thing I say go for it. :) - Brianna

Part #4 - Chapter 3 - Your Kind Is A Disgrace As I Spit In Your Face
blackhart96                   (User #10812) N/A 11/29/2012 07:08:43pm

Loving the dynamic between Matt and
the vampires. Reminds me of Spike
and Buffy in Season 2 of Buffy.

Part #5 - Chapter 4 - The Chance Is There If You Want It All That Bad
blackhart96                   (User #10812) N/A 11/29/2012 07:08:30pm

I feel so sorry for Syn. First the poison
and then going blind. And as for
Johnny and Arin I say go for it.

Part #4 - Chapter 3 - Your Kind Is A Disgrace As I Spit In Your Face
blackhart96                   (User #10812) N/A 11/29/2012 06:39:37pm

Loving the dynamic between Matt and
the vampires. Reminds me of Spike
and Buffy in Season 2 of Buffy.

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