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Part #3 - Chapter 2 - Home, Work And Beyond
Lips_of_Deceit03                   (User #10523) N/A 11/30/2012 06:15:55pm

This story sounds very good and promising so far. Eager to see what will happen next!

Lady Enigma                   (User #10570) N/A 11/20/2012 12:27:08pm

Okay, at first I wasn't going to read this as Rae had the
idea months ago. But then I got curious and you know what?
It's the same as not one, but TWO other stories. 50 Shades
started out as a fanfiction itself, on a fanfiction website.
That put aside, this is a direct copy of the book! Your main
girl is leading the exact same life as Ana, and is doing the
exact same actions, at the exact same time as Ana does in the
book. It's very very poor, very poor.

Avenged_FoREVer                   (User #10889) N/A 11/20/2012 07:01:01am

So I went to Mibba and didn't even get all the way through Spannerr's
story 50 shades of shadows and you did change some stuff. But it is a
little too close to the other story. Definitely be careful with that.
Plagiarism is not a good thing. - Brianna

KittyInferno                   (User #9933) N/A 11/19/2012 10:15:46pm

It's clearly not 'inspired' by the books, it's blatantly THE BOOKS!

ManicFame                   (User #11048) N/A 11/19/2012 06:00:52pm

Hang on...ignore that review. I realize I must sound like a complete idiot, it's just I haven't read 50 Shades of Grey and blah. I hope you didn't take offense, I wasn't at all accusing you of stealing. Since I haven't read the novel, I didn't know you were sticking to the themes and stuff. I apologise for my word vomit and lack of facts.
I'm interested to see what twists you'll bring to the story! x
-Kay.

Part #2 - Chapter 1 - The Interview
KittyInferno                   (User #9933) N/A 11/19/2012 05:34:26pm

So at first I was a little intrigued by this as I have had a '50 shades' story planned for Syn for quite a while now. But after reading this I realise that your one is nothing like mine, in fact it's quite a lot like E.L.James' one except you changed some minor details like names, jobs etc. You may think that this is harmless but in actual fact, if she found this or someone who works for her publishing company did, they could take action against you. By all means do your version of the 50 shades story but make it your own, not hers with a few edits. That's not fair on her and it's not fair on you. That being said tho, I liked the idea of M Shadows as the new Mr Grey altho I do prefer Mr Gates myself :) Good luck with your writing, please do not take offense by my review, I have meant no harm by it :)
Rae
xoxo

ManicFame                   (User #11048) N/A 11/19/2012 03:59:39pm

Hm, it's strange because on mibba Spannerr and ManicFame made a story very similar to this. Are you either of them?
It's very good by the way!

Part #2 - Chapter 1 - The Interview
Avenged_FoREVer                   (User #10889) N/A 11/19/2012 06:53:36am

Oh wow, I really like this. I hate they decided to retire but you never know
what will happen. I can't wait to see what you have planned for this story
:) -Brianna

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