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Charlie_Lavigne                   (User #11243) N/A 11/01/2012 09:26:31pm

this story grew on me so fast i didnt even see it happening
i love them! Matt needs to get his head out of his ass and
realice he loves Phoebe and even though he loves Val, he
just doesnt love her the "romantic" way anymore, maybe just
like a good friend, and i agree with makenziegates she
should stop being so logical sometimes and just enjoy it, i
would hehehe... please please more updates cant wait!!!!

Avenged_FoREVer                   (User #10889) N/A 10/18/2012 09:34:09pm

I'm really enjoying this story! So, it is definitely obvious that they both
have a very strong sexual attraction to each other. But I agree with
FearingSyn, they have never really just talked and gotten to know each
other. And they might in fact find out that they do love each other. But
they need to take the time and find out. Otherwise Matt needs to stop
cheating on Val. Great update and can't wait for the next one! - Brianna

Fearing Syn                   (User #10458) N/A 10/18/2012 06:23:57am

12 HOURS!!!!! don't they have something better to do than fuck? How much do they even know about each other? I don't think they really love each other. if they did they would start dating, take things slowly and quietly, and get to know each other. I think they're just sexually attracted. I'm sorry if I'm not very supportive of their 'relationship'. Maybe if they both made an effort to make it work...

143shadowluv                   (User #6617) N/A 10/18/2012 12:29:17am

She should tell him how she really feels! I think matt feels the
same! Dang go them for having marathon sex!!!! Hehe love this
story! Update soon love

MakenzieGates                   (User #10206) N/A 10/18/2012 12:18:25am

I love this story!! I can't believe how in love with pheobe, Matt is and I wish she would be a little less logical about the situation and take advantage of it. But anyway I love this and please update soon!!!!!

MakenzieGates                   (User #10206) N/A 10/18/2012 12:18:21am

I love this story!! I can't believe how in love with pheobe, Matt is and I wish she would be a little less logical about the situation and take advantage of it. But anyway I love this and please update soon!!!!!

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