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Part #24 - Chapter 22
MorganUndead                   (User #7903) N/A 11/25/2012 06:40:18pm

Amazing babe! Absolutely brilliant!
Couldn't have been any better. I'm going to re-read the whole thing again!
Loved it!

SynfulOne                   (User #10322) N/A 11/22/2012 03:17:08pm

I honestly believed Jimmy had died...that would have been
such a sad ending! So glad he's still alive - I really
loved his character and what he did and would do for the
kids in his care. And I'm thrilled that Brian and Zacky
both made it and are relatively OK! Zacky and Brianna are
adorable.

What an interesting, dramatic story! Excellent work!!

XOXO,
A

moneclover                   (User #7752) N/A 11/22/2012 06:07:09am

YAY!! What a perfect ending. :)

Avenged_FoREVer                   (User #10889) N/A 11/21/2012 05:32:49pm

Awesome! At first I was like no Jimmy died! I was so glad to see that he
was alive and well at the end. Aw poor Zacky forgetting shoes. But at least
he can walk and talk now! And I'm glad Brian will be able to go home to
Lara soon!

I have really enjoyed this story! It was amazing! I can't wait to start
reading your next story :)

-Brianna

Avenged_FoREVer                   (User #10889) N/A 11/21/2012 05:29:38pm

Awesome! At first I was like no Jimmy died! I was so glad to see that he
was alive and well at the end. Aw poor Zacky forgetting shoes. But at least
he can walk and talk now! And I'm glad Brian will be able to go home to
Lara soon!

I have really enjoyed this story! It was amazing! I can't wait to start
reading your next story :)

-Brianna

Liars And Monsters                   (User #9568) N/A 11/21/2012 01:54:35pm

You as always know how to keep us on edge! this is a great ending and i can't wait to read a new fic soon!

KittyInferno                   (User #9933) N/A 11/21/2012 01:44:16pm

Hahah what a great ending!
I wish that Brian had been able to be at home with Lara but I guess she's only got one more week to wait for him :)
Zacky was adorable forgetting his shoes...
And what a twist! At the start you really had me thinking that Jimmy was really getting buried... I was all set to rant about it but then there he was, all smiles at the end

Loved this, great job!
Much love
Rae
xoxo

Part #23 - Chapter 21
moneclover                   (User #7752) N/A 11/21/2012 06:12:32am

To be honest, I don't know how I feel about this chapter. It
was a little overwhelming. I'll be sad if Jimmy doesn't make
it, but I never know what you'll come up with, so there's no
telling. I'm excited to see the end.

Avenged_FoREVer                   (User #10889) N/A 11/21/2012 12:25:25am

I am so glad Jimmy waw able to save Arin and Johnny. Now backup needs
to get there ane help Jimmy! I hope Jimmy is ok! Great update and I am
looking forward to see what happens in the last chapter! -Brianna

Avenged_FoREVer                   (User #10889) N/A 11/20/2012 06:46:54pm

I am so glad Jimmy was able to save Arin and Johnny. Now backup needs
to hurry and help Jimmy. I don't want anything bad to happen to him!
Great update! -Brianna

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