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Part #4 - Weeping Willow
FallenxAngelx                   (User #10925) N/A 08/25/2012 04:25:04pm

Aww, Connor loves her so much it's adorable. They are so cute together. I
can't wait to see what happens when Matt shows up. Keep this going
please!

Part #2 - The Letter
FallenxAngelx                   (User #10925) N/A 08/25/2012 04:36:06am

Ooh this looks interesting. Please add me to the list so I can read more.
Thanks much :)

Part #4 - Weeping Willow
gowiththeflow                   (User #9871) N/A 08/24/2012 10:44:33am

Naming a sex toy Fred? Dear god my love, what on earth goes
through your head? XD Haha, I love it! Connor and Willow are
just adorable. Can't imagine how heartbreaking it must be
for the both of them as they care so much about each other.
How they met was really original too. As always, an awesome
chapter :D I'd like more now please.

~Embrace The Madness... foREVer~                   (User #7321) N/A 08/24/2012 03:38:52am

Ok, so...

I burst out giggling when I read the phrase "cop a squat".

Cop a squat. Now that isn't one you hear every day!

Love the vibrator thing.

Willow. Is a beautiful name. I like!

*runs off to double check chapter* I need to see if this is ready for your viewing pleasure.

AMC                   (User #10620) N/A 08/24/2012 01:51:14am

Gosh, Connor and Willow seem so strong, like they're perfect
for each other.
The flashback was so damn cute :3
And the song was beautiful.
I almost wanted to cry during this chapter. Several time.
It's quite emotionnal, and it's really well written!
Can't wait for more.

SynfulOne                   (User #10322) N/A 08/24/2012 12:06:03am

Willow and Connor are both such unbelievably strong people
- I don't know how either of them can hold it together
while going through what they are and knowing what's to
come. So so heartbreaking. I LOVE the line "we don't do
sad" - that is so sweet!

Fred? LOL!!

Can't wait for more...as usual...

XOXO,
A

Amyyy26                   (User #10459) N/A 08/23/2012 10:55:27pm

Hahah, loved the bits about the sex toys, I'd be so
embarrassed!

It was a really lovely chapter though, lots of emotion, I
love it. Well done! Can't wait for the next chapter :)

RayneofGates21                   (User #10836) N/A 08/23/2012 10:24:19pm

Awww! This chapter made me almost want to cry
And I giggled alot with the ordering vibrators
Naming it Fred instead of B.o.b XDDDDD
Update sooooooonnnn!

Part #3 - Request Received
RayneofGates21                   (User #10836) N/A 08/23/2012 10:13:09pm

Glad Matt decided to go, how could anyone turn down a letter like that? (:
Good chapter, can't wait to read the rest

Part #2 - The Letter
RayneofGates21                   (User #10836) N/A 08/23/2012 09:48:13pm

Oh my god, this is the second story of yours I have read that has left me utterly speechless!
That drew me right in :)
Please please please put me on the reading list!

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