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Part #7 - Chapter 6
Mforaker                   (User #11125) N/A 10/26/2012 10:35:09pm

I haven't read the entire story, but as I was reading this chapter I saw the KATT reference. I'm an Okie and now you've peaked my interest so I'm gonna go read the story from the beginning.













ve peaked

Part #6 - Chapter 5
Fearing Syn                   (User #10458) N/A 07/29/2012 03:09:25pm

you updated! YAH!!!! Brian is such a whore, haha. Mizzy seems fucking awesome! Damn, Brian is going to cause a lot of trouble, just a hunch. Damn that bitch who slapped him, don't blame her. But as big asshole Brian might be, I still feel sorry for him. Once again Brian is a whore, i mean he can't he even go to the mall without checking her out. this is interesting. sorry i accidentally left 2 reviews on the previous chapter. i love this story and can't wait to see what happens. Good luck!
Maddy

Part #5 - Chapter 4
Fearing Syn                   (User #10458) N/A 07/28/2012 09:13:37pm

Damn, I would die if the most handsome guy alive kept grinning and winking at me. Poor Mizzy for having to be Brian's nanny. Brian is an asshole, but to be honest it makes him seem so much hotter. Thanks for the update, and please update when you can
Maddy

Fearing Syn                   (User #10458) N/A 07/28/2012 09:13:27pm

Damn, I would die if the most handsome guy alive kept grinning and winking at me. Poor Mizzy for having to be Brian's nanny. Brian is an asshole, but to be honest it makes him seem so much hotter. Thanks for the update, and please update when you can
Maddy

Part #4 - Chapter 3
Fearing Syn                   (User #10458) N/A 07/26/2012 07:20:19pm

Mizzy should be careful...Brian only wants one thing. Update for me please? I really want to know what happens between Brian and Mizzy, though i think her sister, Josey, is going to try and sleep with Brian. Update again soon!

Part #3 - Chapter 2
Fearing Syn                   (User #10458) N/A 07/26/2012 07:10:50pm

Mizzy seems cool and her sister did in fact seem like a slut. Lemme guess Mizzy is going to find Brian incredibly repulsive and he's gonna like her sister. Just a silly guess.

Part #2 - Chapter 1
Fearing Syn                   (User #10458) N/A 07/26/2012 07:05:37pm

ooh, interesting...i can't wait to see where this goes...Brian is such a bad ass, it's extremely hot. Moving on to next chapter!

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