Was this a one-shot? I sure hope it wasn't! I really wasn't
expecting this storyline - I agree with the others,
completely came over in goosebumps. I felt like I was being
touched by a ghost, haha! I think I simply adore your
writing, yup, must be it.
OMFG you've done it to me again! I had goosebumps reading this! Like seriously! You have to update soon, I NEED to know what happens next!
Damn girl - I got the chills reading this! Not only from the
guys all being able to feel Emrie's gestures of thanks to
them, but also from Jimmy being her guide into the
afterlife...if you have to die, what a way to go. Very well
done! Loved it! :)