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Part #3 - Two.
Fearing Syn                   (User #10458) N/A 09/09/2012 05:40:38am

it's funny when Brian should be there for her he thinks about taking a shower. at least he doesn't want to be dirty and stink. Still insist problem lies with Brent. Poor Brian and Faye. You have to update I'd kill to find out what happens next!

Part #2 - One.
Fearing Syn                   (User #10458) N/A 09/09/2012 05:19:19am

I think the problem lies with Brent, maybe he just can't father a child. Dick. Brian you gotta love the man. I agree with SynfulOne it would be awesome if she gets pregnant with Brian's baby. Brent is such an ass! Loving this!

Part #3 - Two.
xFuRiEx                   (User #9685) N/A 07/20/2012 01:42:00pm

And finally Brian knows the entire story!
Maybe now he can give her some proper support.
The descriptions in the chapter were amazing and all of it just showed how human they both are. Even in the most desperate times you still think of the little things. Maybe Brian just needed something to distract him.
I feel bad that he went through a divorce. I don't get why that happens though. How can you be head over heels in love with someone for years and then all of a sudden you can't stand each other? Doesn't make sense to me at all...
Hopefully the pair can fix each other. Brian seems okay. I just hope that Faye can stay strong through all of this.
Another great chapter! :) Can't wait for the next update!
xoxo

Part #2 - One.
xFuRiEx                   (User #9685) N/A 07/20/2012 01:36:33pm

Okay, I just realized that I never reviewed the first chapter even though I read it ages ago when you first posted it. I swear I'm losing my mind.
Anyway, I love this. It's really refreshing to read something original for a change. So yeah, great work!
Faye ought to sue Brent's ass for a divorce and while she's at it she might as well strip him clean of everything, because he's an ass for treating her the way he does. It's not her fault that she can't get pregnant. I get that he's frustrated by that, but there are other way to have children.
Yay Brian for coming to save the day even though it was probably completely unintentional. :)
xoxo

Part #3 - Two.
SEPisces_A7X_foREVer                   (User #10385) N/A 07/19/2012 03:10:12am

This story is at a very great start, and I really am interested to read what
happens next, especially since Faye and Brian are actually getting to
know each other more.
Update Soon!!!
=)

resyn                   (User #10795) N/A 07/18/2012 02:23:02pm

This story is so bittersweet. You can feel how much they are both in pain and just trying to anchor themselves. I really love this, can't wait for more...

KittyInferno                   (User #9933) N/A 07/18/2012 01:10:33pm

Oh my good God... How much do I love this story? To quote my kids 'To the moon and back!' The description of absolutely freaking everything was awesome, I love your writing :) And Brian, in need of a shower or not, sounded absolutely swoon-worthy! But then, he always has that effect (affect?) on me :p
Update this soon!
loves ya
Rae
xoxo

Part #2 - One.
SynfulOne                   (User #10322) N/A 06/22/2012 02:27:33am

Wow, what a douchebag Brent is! How dare he act that way
just because she hasn't become pregnant...he's supposed to
love her for better or for worse. She gave up everything for
him, and he just...leaves?

Wouldn't it be sweet if Faye ended up with Brian and had HIS
child? Looking forward to see what transpires...

Love your work! :)

KittyInferno                   (User #9933) N/A 06/21/2012 10:06:25pm

Here he comes to save the day! OMG I love it when you make Brian the White Knight, I really really do :D You have the ability to make me fall for that man just that little bit more everytime I read your work :D I loved this, Brent's an ass for walking out... Update soon :)
Loves ya
Rae
xoxo

SEPisces_A7X_foREVer                   (User #10385) N/A 06/21/2012 11:48:46am

I really like this, it makes me really wonder what is gonna happen next.
Update Soon
=)

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