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Part #9 - Sometimes I Just Can't Sleep Thinking Of Everything We Could Have Been
Ex&Oh                   (User #5929) N/A 07/08/2012 04:47:04pm

Gosh that was so hot.. yet gross at the same time.

C'mon Zack, get your shit together. Be a man. You love Jenn,
she loves you. It's simple! It's easy.

GOD!

Part #8 - Can We Kiss Like We Do In My Head, Can We Dance Like We Do On My Bed
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please! PLEASE! That was so heart-wrenching at the end! It
was so SWEET though when she said I love you!

I hope they get back together soon! I friggin' love this
story! Update soon! :D

143shadowluv                   (User #6617) N/A 06/26/2012 11:30:33pm

Omg she talked to him yay! Omg that was so emotional! I almost
started to cry. I hope she goes back to cali soon!! Good chapter
hun!!

Part #7 - The Other Night, You Wouldn't Believe The Dream I Just Had About You And Me
143shadowluv                   (User #6617) N/A 06/25/2012 11:37:39pm

He called her?!? Omg she has to talk to him! Eek update soon
please!

Ex&Oh                   (User #5929) N/A 06/24/2012 04:34:38am

EXACTLY! You want him Jenn! Duh! Let's get it together!

Answer that phone, damnit!

I really really really love this story and I'm super duper
excited to read what those two will converse about..

Hopefully something like "Hey I love you.." for reals.

resyn                   (User #10795) N/A 06/23/2012 04:21:43pm

Really enjoyed this. Finally Zacky is calling, did he have the same dream or did she really call him and not know? OOOOhhhh can't wait for more.

AMC                   (User #10620) N/A 06/23/2012 02:53:30pm

It was a great chapter!! I can't wait to read what Zack has to say to Jenn :)
Love this story!
Bye,
AMC.

Part #6 - Could This Be Out Of Line? To Say You're The Only One Breaking Me Down
resyn                   (User #10795) N/A 06/19/2012 06:19:48pm

I agree with Ash, She needs to go back to Zack. They can't fix anything if she hies off to only god knows where cause Zacky doesn't.

Now I'm conflicted though. She's got her parents hopes all up but she needs to go back....go back!

Thanks for updating! I loves it.
(on meds so if it does make sense sorry)

Ex&Oh                   (User #5929) N/A 06/19/2012 01:04:58am

Zacky's sadness makes me sad, but I'm glad Brian threw it
in his face that he fucked up. It was the product of his
own mess ups... So I can't feel too bad for him but still.
Goodbyeee Gena.

Now Jenn...why does she feel guilty about leaving him? She
was the other woman and he was treating her as such... She
needs to stop in Des Moines, rest, then flip around and go
back to Zack... They can make it work.


It needs to happen! I can't wait to read more of this.. I
love this story and I'm glad you're writing again!

-Ash, Ex&Oh

Part #5 - There Was A Time When The Pieces Fit, But I Watched Them Fall Away
Ex&Oh                   (User #5929) N/A 06/19/2012 12:43:33am

Goddamnit Zack. Jenn is leaving you... do something! Gosh,
I'm really shipping Zack and Jenn hard right now.

Freaking Gena needs to be out of the picture, period.

Gosh I love this story!

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