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Part #2 - Unexpected Opportunities
Fearing Syn                   (User #10458) N/A 06/14/2012 03:40:55pm

I wonder if she'll take the opportunity... Talent, must be a family thing, lol. Okay, i really want to know how this story is going to turn out!

S.A.Skelleton                   (User #7650) N/A 03/03/2012 07:15:34pm

I can't wait for the next chapter. :)

KaseyMarie                   (User #9365) N/A 03/03/2012 07:09:10pm

hell yea! she will be as talented as her brother! I hope she as many opportunities as he does. update soon?

Mrs.PlagueOfVengeance                   (User #10660) N/A 03/03/2012 05:19:49am

CAN I HAVE JIMMY?!?! :D

Name: Kodie Anderson
Age: whatever fits your story line :))
Appearence:
half Native American, half German. Olive, tanned skin. Plump lips and
dark, chocolate eyes. Dark, long black wavy hair. 5'6 slim and muscular
with nice curves.
Style:
Jeans (skinny and shredded) with band shirts and cute tank tops. Nice
vests, leather jacket. Loves neon colored shorts, and sugar skull shirts.
Wear Vans, converse, and Nike. NO make-up, EVER :))
Personality:
Crazy and hyper, but fragile. She has a touch exterior but inside she's
crazy messed up. She has ADHD and can never focus, making it hard for
her to hold a job down. She loves her friends because that's all she really
has left. Besides her mother, she has no family. She loves to joke around
and pick at her friends. Would die for almost anyone. Can't stand to see
someone hurt and will do everything in her will to cheer them up! She can
speak fluent english, german, spanish, and russian.
Hobbies:
Art, dance, acting, singing, horseback riding, watching the history
channel, playing the violin, guitar, piano, reading, swimming
Little background info:
Kodie's father skipped out on her, her mother, and her older brother
Jeremy. When Jeremy was 10, he was diagnosed with cancer and died two
years later. Kodie was devestated. She turned to music and art to take the
pain away. After her brother's death Kodie's mom drew further and further
away. She became a little stir crazy, never leaving the house. Kodie takes
care of her as best she can. All Kodie's life she's been put down, but her
spirit is all she needs.

Mrs.PlagueOfVengeance                   (User #10660) N/A 03/03/2012 05:19:33am

CAN I HAVE JIMMY?!?! :D

Name: Kodie Anderson
Age: whatever fits your story line :))
Appearence:
half Native American, half German. Olive, tanned skin. Plump lips and
dark, chocolate eyes. Dark, long black wavy hair. 5'6 slim and muscular
with nice curves.
Style:
Jeans (skinny and shredded) with band shirts and cute tank tops. Nice
vests, leather jacket. Loves neon colored shorts, and sugar skull shirts.
Wear Vans, converse, and Nike. NO make-up, EVER :))
Personality:
Crazy and hyper, but fragile. She has a touch exterior but inside she's
crazy messed up. She has ADHD and can never focus, making it hard for
her to hold a job down. She loves her friends because that's all she really
has left. Besides her mother, she has no family. She loves to joke around
and pick at her friends. Would die for almost anyone. Can't stand to see
someone hurt and will do everything in her will to cheer them up! She can
speak fluent english, german, spanish, and russian.
Hobbies:
Art, dance, acting, singing, horseback riding, watching the history
channel, playing the violin, guitar, piano, reading, swimming
Little background info:
Kodie's father skipped out on her, her mother, and her older brother
Jeremy. When Jeremy was 10, he was diagnosed with cancer and died two
years later. Kodie was devestated. She turned to music and art to take the
pain away. After her brother's death Kodie's mom drew further and further
away. She became a little stir crazy, never leaving the house. Kodie takes
care of her as best she can. All Kodie's life she's been put down, but her
spirit is all she needs.

Part #2 - Unexpected Opportunities
lilyvengz0001                   (User #10705) N/A 03/03/2012 04:29:00am

Uh oh! Sounds like talent runs in the family!

Can't wait to read more! Update soon please! :)

KaseyMarie                    (ANONYMOUS) N/A 03/02/2012 06:44:55am

Haven't been able to log on for 4 hours now
But if you wanna pick a lady for Matt, here's some info

The name's Kasey
I'm about 5 foot tall, short I know. I have dark brown hair to my
shoulders and bangs as well. I'm "petite" and have greenish hazel
eyes.
I'm sarcastic and loyal, upbeat and always a great listener
If you need me info or pick me, just message me!

S.A.Skelleton                   (User #7650) N/A 03/02/2012 04:36:57am

I'll take johnny :). I sent u my info in a
message.

LuvsA7X                   (User #10221) N/A 03/02/2012 03:28:25am

I would love to be in your story, doesn't matter who you place me with :)

Jessica
Age: 26
Hobbies: traveling, photography, painting, working out, soccer, shopping,
drinking with friends, going to concerts and music festivals
Appearance: short 5'4", thin waist but curves in my chest and hips/butt,
long dark, dark brown hair with thick blonde highlights, side swept bangs,
dark brown eyes, light makeup (foundation, eye liner and a little mascara),
cartilage piercing in mt left ear and a Monroe piercing on the right side,
several tattoos (lotus on the back of my neck, henna designs down my left
calf and ankle, apple blossom behind my right ear, deathbat on my right
shoulder blade, and a claddagh on my left foot), I wear shorts, tank tops,
band shirts, and skinny jeans, I mostly wear flip flops.
Personality: determined, sweet, laid back most of the time but I definitely
have a wild and crazy side, I'm quick to fight for friends and family, very
loyal, and I love to make others laugh.

I really hope you pick me! Thanks so much and can't wait to read your
story!!!

lilyvengz0001                   (User #10705) N/A 03/02/2012 02:31:26am

Hi! I would like Zacky please! :)

Name:Liliana Faith Jenkins. AKA Lily :)
Looks: long black hair with bright red on the bottom and chunky
red highlights. Wears it either curly or straight. Tan skin. Blue
eyes. Wears only a little makeup unless its a special occasion.
Wears a lot of jeans and band tees, along with off the shoulder
shirts, boots, wedges, and DC shoes. Loves maxi dresses and
sandals too.

Personality: very laid back and easy going, unless someone messes
with her friends and family. Loves to have a good time but also
loves a good movie night. Has a passion for music, mostly piano
and guitar.

I hope you pick me! Can't wait to read your story! :)

Xoxo

lilyvengz0001

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