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Spring_Rabbit                   (User #9098) N/A 07/24/2013 02:35:25pm

I bet that Zack is thinking about confessing? I wonder how he is going to
react if he sees her hanging out with Benji. I think I have an idea though. I
just hope this isn't the end for Zack and Ana.

Ana Alba                   (User #11349) N/A 02/25/2013 01:22:21am

Wow winder what's gonna go down Zack is so unpredictable.

CHELLYRAWR                   (User #11289) N/A 11/19/2012 11:07:44pm


YoursTruly                   (User #10720) N/A 02/25/2012 08:03:37pm

Of course, Zack chickened out again. But now they're at a club and Benji's there. Gonna be an interesting chapter :D. Keep on updating! (I know theres the one after this, but I'm talking about after that)

Rachel Potter                   (User #9488) N/A 02/19/2012 02:44:27pm

Oh, I've been waiting so long!
I've been wondering for awhile how Ana is gonna receive the info that Zack...
had sex? I don't even know. It was more Gena's pleasure than his.. Actually, I
just wanna know how she feels after she's told. I imagine that'll be just
another crack that'll start another earthquake.

Wanna know the sad part? That I'm relating their relationship to a natural
disaster. They're always either sunny, a hurricane, a tsunami, an earthquake,
a tornado, or a volcano. It's a lil disappointing, I guess, but it adds to that
affect of a tumultuous relationship.

Anyway, I'mma start the next Mine All Mine right now.
Rachel Potter

Lady Numb                   (User #8253) N/A 02/11/2012 02:00:33pm

Sorry sorry sorry sorry sorryyyyyy!
I'm such a bad reader, I'm so late for this! :(
And it's too bad especially cause as usual this is great, I
don't care if it's small, it still is amazing....
But let's start from the beginning!
So...this time Ana really looks serious about getting over
the whole Zack's thing... I admire her for this, but I
don't want her to, cause I know she can if she wants to,
but I'm just human and you know how much I want her and
Zacky to go back the same time, being outside
and knowing the whole situation, I don't want her to
suffer, cause she will when she realizes why Zack is
suddenly so remissive, sweet and nice...well, not exactly
nice, let's say decent... what he did is awful and he gotta
feel guilty, he deserves it cause he wans't thinking, but
at the same time... well, he made a mistake, but can she
really blame him? Sometimes if feels like they're in a
competition to see who's gonna be the first to drive the
other completely insane, it's only normal that they ned up
doing silly things... and if it's true that Ana wouldn't
probably end up hooking up with Benj or anyone else (but
knowing you and your ideas, never say never :P), itì's also
true that Zack is different from her... oooh, you're
driving ME insane here!!! xD
One thing is sure, at least in my opinion: she will be so
mad at Zack iuf she finds out, because she will realize all
of this being nice and kinda supporting comes from guilt
and that is no good... I'm dying to know how this is gonna
go on, hopefully I'll be able to find out soon... as soon
as I manage to read the following chapter!! :)
Great job as usual, xxx!

forevermaria6661                   (User #10303) N/A 02/10/2012 05:59:31am

It's been like 2 weeks woman!! Where's the next chapter!? Sorry I'm just
realllllly anxious. I want to know what happens next :)

CharlotteGates                   (User #9563) N/A 02/07/2012 02:37:11pm

Sorry it's taken me so long to review, I've been away for two weeks,
anyway I'm so glad you updated I'm in love with this story! The start of this
is amazing! I'm gla Zack went to te party and I can't wait to see his POV
Can't wait for the next update!

Rottenchicken99                   (User #10244) N/A 02/06/2012 07:51:13pm

ahhhh!! finally an update, so excited!! i love this story. i know anna will most likely find out about zacks mistake.. i just want them to make nice already!! great chapter, cant wait for another.

JessicaFruitcake                   (User #10023) N/A 02/04/2012 06:10:32pm

Oh...I guess I haven't reviewed yet.
Anyhoo, cannot wait to see this mess.
They're gonna has sexy sex
and then it's gonna get complicated
and then z is gonna be silly
and that's gonna make Ana mad as hell
and matt's gonna try to get with her
and they might accidentally do it (drunk, drugs, etc)
and then everybody's gonna be like, WTF???!!!!
Ana may be leaving the band for good soon, I feel.
Makes me sad.
This chapter was...a teaser, and I enjoyed it but T'was too
short. I'm gonna come over to your place or wherever you
write and make a writing contraption where you sit in front
of the computer and write until you fall asleep. yeh?
okey dokey then! I'll be waiting, haha.
Good luck.

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