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Part #3 - Easy Target
Amyyy26                   (User #10459) N/A 04/08/2012 03:55:07pm

Awww poor Zina, it must be so hard for her :/ and for Zack. I feel really sorry for them both, I'm glad that he's there to support her and make her feel better about the situation.

TOTALLY WANT MATT BTW if he's not taken :p

I'm glad they're spending as much time as they can together, it'll be so hard to say goodbye!

Great chapter, keep it going!
YYA
xx

Part #2 - Breaking Inside
Amyyy26                   (User #10459) N/A 04/08/2012 03:49:35pm

I love this already :)

It's nice to read something that isn't based in huntington, it's the other way around!

you should certainly continue this, I love iiiit.

It'll be interesting to see what happens and how things change!

And of course, let us know if you do have a casting call!

xxx

Part #3 - Easy Target
AMC                   (User #10620) N/A 01/11/2012 08:31:04am

Hey, this was a funny chapter. Especially the Jimmy /Brian part x].
And Zack's so cute with his sister !!
Too bad for his dad :/

Well, good luck for you writings, Bye !!

Liera                   (User #9529) N/A 01/10/2012 10:59:02pm

Awe, I feel a little bad for his dad lol. I love how Zee is viewing things. He's an awesome person/little brother :) I liked this chapter. it was pretty neat. I hope you update this story again soon, cuz i think i'm starting to really like it :)(:

Fearing Syn                   (User #10458) N/A 01/10/2012 09:38:30pm

Sorry i left seven reviews but my phone stuck and must've left all the reviews.

Fearing Syn                   (User #10458) N/A 01/10/2012 09:35:00pm

Awesome! Pow! Take that Zee's dad! Sorry! I think...i know you should continue the story. Comments on casting call...
I'd love to be in your story and i review.
I'd like Brian.
So i will send you the details.
Fearing Syn

Fearing Syn                   (User #10458) N/A 01/10/2012 09:34:50pm

Awesome! Pow! Take that Zee's dad! Sorry! I think...i know you should continue the story. Comments on casting call...
I'd love to be in your story and i review.
I'd like Brian.
So i will send you the details.
Fearing Syn

Fearing Syn                   (User #10458) N/A 01/10/2012 09:34:48pm

Awesome! Pow! Take that Zee's dad! Sorry! I think...i know you should continue the story. Comments on casting call...
I'd love to be in your story and i review.
I'd like Brian.
So i will send you the details.
Fearing Syn

Fearing Syn                   (User #10458) N/A 01/10/2012 09:29:20pm

Awesome! Pow! Take that Zee's dad! Sorry! I think...i know you should continue the story. Comments on casting call...
I'd love to be in your story and i review.
I'd like Brian.
So i will send you the details.
Fearing Syn

Fearing Syn                   (User #10458) N/A 01/10/2012 09:29:12pm

Awesome! Pow! Take that Zee's dad! Sorry! I think...i know you should continue the story. Comments on casting call...
I'd love to be in your story and i review.
I'd like Brian.
So i will send you the details.
Fearing Syn

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