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Someone                   (User #7656) N/A 03/06/2012 09:13:09pm

I feel depressed.... BUT I LOVED IT! I'm going to go cheer myself up with the reassurance that Patrick and Pete are still very much alive. Thanks for the story, though. :) x

Sassy                   (User #8175) N/A 01/07/2012 06:52:46pm

I wasn't sure about this when I first opened it - all the stuff at the top kind of gave away the plot, but even so, I kept on as there was something about how it was written. I was really impressed by how creepy it was and even though you'd basically opened by telling the ending, I still wanted to know how it happened.
You are good now, but this was one of those stories that made me think that you are going to be a very good writer! Keep at it!

Sas x

(ps - if it were me, I'd take out the warnings at the top, they really do take the edge off a great story)

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