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Part #19 - Things Are Never Simple
Anaken                   (User #10433) N/A 05/22/2012 12:08:50pm

Such a great chapter! And a long one too!
You are such a tease....I wonder what happens next when they
go back to the room.
The music you picked was perfect! And when Matt mentioned
thinking of his parents having sex it just cracked me up.
Drinking too much alcohol can only mean trouble. Good trouble that is!
Please post the next chapter soon!

Part #18 - Temptation Is Harder Than You Think
foREVer97                   (User #9980) N/A 04/29/2012 09:03:20pm

Seriously, can they fuck already?!?
...
Sorry, the sexual tension is driving me insane!

Please update soon! =)

foREVer97                   (User #9980) N/A 04/29/2012 09:03:19pm

Seriously, can they fuck already?!?
...
Sorry, the sexual tension is driving me insane!

Please update soon! =)

foREVer97                   (User #9980) N/A 04/29/2012 09:03:16pm

Seriously, can they fuck already?!?
...
Sorry, the sexual tension is driving me insane!

Please update soon! =)

Anaken                   (User #10433) N/A 04/29/2012 01:02:53pm

So much sexual tension!
I would have given in to him right from the start!
I'm anxious to see where this story is going.
I don't think that they'll be able to remain just friends.
And what will happen to Val? Gotta feel sorry for her.
(Unless she's up to no good?????)
Love your story. Hurry with an update!

AMC                   (User #10620) N/A 04/29/2012 08:24:25am

Hmm, I don't think That they'll be able to be real friends one day :/
But it was an interesting chapter :)
Can't wait for the next one!
Bye,
AMC.

Part #17 - Everybody Loves Surprises
AMC                   (User #10620) N/A 04/20/2012 08:35:00am

Ha! This man is totally crazy. This was a badass idea. But hé seems to behave though.
The mother is a cute character x)
I'm curious to see how things will go once they'll be at the hotel.
Plus I have the feeling that Val will find out, or something.
Great update, can't wail to read the next one!
Bye,
AMC.

Part #16 - Seeing Is Always Better Than Hearing
foREVer97                   (User #9980) N/A 04/18/2012 09:20:45pm

I hope they can randomly meet up, or something like that. I want to see
how they would react to that xP

Great chapter! It was hot...! Can't wait for the next one! =D

AMC                   (User #10620) N/A 04/18/2012 01:58:44pm

Seems like they can't be just friends :/
I found it cute and funny that Matt was jealous haha!
Can't wait for the next update! Keep up the good work.
Bye,
AMC.

Anaken                   (User #10433) N/A 04/18/2012 04:06:47am

I don't know how you come up with some of these chapters, but they keep getting better and better!
I love how turned on they are about each other.
What can I say, that was so fucking hot!

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