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Spring_Rabbit                   (User #9098) N/A 07/24/2013 02:00:41pm

Wow, I can't believe Zack did that! He really messed everything up now.
He should've known Gena couldn't be trusted. I wonder how he is going to
feel in the morning. I think that Ana will eventually have to know, though.
Great chapter!

Ana Alba                   (User #11349) N/A 02/25/2013 01:15:49am

He fucked up big time! Damn he's in for an earful. I hope he tells Ana or
shit will go bad!

CHELLYRAWR                   (User #11289) N/A 11/19/2012 07:38:44am

OMFG...IM SO SAD..WHY??

soullust                   (User #8371) N/A 04/10/2012 07:12:25am

I..but...DAMN IT ZACK! lol

LittleGreenBurrito                   (User #10746) N/A 02/29/2012 09:27:41am

Wow..I actually started to believe that Gena had changed..Hes probably going to end up telling Anna soon...I cant wait to see her reaction.

haleyh16                   (User #10723) N/A 02/25/2012 09:31:31pm

...what!? Gena? Are you kidding me? I would hate Zack so much right now if he
wasn't so repulsed by his decision. You wrote the whole thing really well. I
wanted to be furious at Zack, but admitting he wanted to blow his brains out
pretty much shows just how regretful he is and how much he truly cares for
Ana. By the way, Deadlihood, great song, great for that section too. Awesome
chapter. I'm on to the next one soon -H

YoursTruly                   (User #10720) N/A 02/25/2012 07:49:10pm

ASDFGHJKL. Of course Gena just had to come in and mess everything up. (I don't hate Gena, only her character in this story) At least Zack had the courage to stop. Although, right after he just ran to the bathroom. THEY NEED TO GET BACK TOGETHER D:. But anyways, keep on writing, because this is an amazing story

vickyyy                   (User #10624) N/A 01/16/2012 10:38:01am

I so feel like crying right now. Zackkkk omg I can't believe everything that
just happened.. Especially with gena?! Ugh these people are killing me!!!

Amyyy26                   (User #10459) N/A 12/16/2011 08:57:10pm

I can't go on much longer without an update!!!

Anaken                   (User #10433) N/A 12/10/2011 06:47:50pm

I agree with forevermaria6661. It's been way too long for an update. I swear I check everyday to see if you updated yet. I've reread every chapter too cause it's good. Please hurry!

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