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xxdeathbat6661xx                   (User #10346) N/A 12/24/2011 10:40:33pm

This was just... fantastic ! You should really continue this or something. this
was, by far, the best one-shot i have ever read


KittyInferno                   (User #9933) N/A 10/24/2011 04:14:21pm

One word.... WOW

I currently sit here with a stunned expression on my face...

And now I'm off to find that damn ferry with the fit men on, lol...

This was awesome hunni
loves you

valoankea                   (User #9695) N/A 09/13/2011 02:41:40am

I am so in love with this story! It was fantastic! I know it's a one shot, but it was great; and you should totally write more on this!

zackyvsloveslave                   (User #6375) N/A 08/31/2011 12:18:12am

wow that made me a little teary eyed because i was in that
same way then i met my boyfriend and he freed me(not in the
way Brian did lol) but sex with Brian? Hell yeah! I was
picturing it and everything too. I loved it! Cant wait to
read more of your work!

Lauren4Syn                   (User #10187) N/A 08/30/2011 11:25:55pm

Berry brothers.. Yummy! Im crazy about Jason!.. Thats an amazing story, good job! Your so origional! ^_^

Marie                   (User #10093) N/A 08/30/2011 09:03:17pm

It was breathtaking..We all encounter with each other for a purpose.
Sometimes we meet a person for a simple reason. IN this case it was because Lily needed to forget his asshole ex-boyfriend.. Brian gave her back her self-esteem,Now she's a lil less broken..
IT was fun to read it,
Something enterly new ,

phenomenalalex                   (User #9584) N/A 08/30/2011 03:32:00am

I would think that fornicating with Brian would set anyone free. Hahah. Especially if you've got a dick of a boyfriend like Terry obviously was. I can just imagine him now. I don't really like guys who treat their girlfriends like garbage. But Lily left and coincidentally ran into some of the sexiest guys ever! And she got laid! Ahaha. Oh my gosh, when you were describing Brian in the bar or whatever, I was just imagining him there all sexy and what not. Mmmmm. Yummy. LOL. I loved this, as I always do! :D You should write more if you get the chance! -alex

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