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Part #8 - Chapter Seven
MissaVengeance                   (User #9041) N/A 12/27/2011 04:21:42am

Im glad the boys are so protective over her. Hopefully the parents
see what the guys see and welcome her into the family. Great
chapter keep the updates coming:)

Part #7 - Chapter Six
synfullybetrayed                   (User #10571) N/A 12/26/2011 11:01:37pm

i really like this story!
it's just heartwarming to read how Jimmy and the rest accepts
her and they'd do anything for her.

Please keep updating! I'm already waiting :D

Part #3 - Chapter Two
Lady Enigma                   (User #10570) N/A 12/21/2011 12:55:03pm

Hmm, me thinks Brian is letting the rockstar lifestyle get to his head

Part #2 - Chapter One
Lady Enigma                   (User #10570) N/A 12/21/2011 01:09:50am

Jimmy the guardian angel!
Poor girl, pisses me off when young people are kicked out like that. Lazy parents taking the easy way out

Part #6 - Chapter Five
JenniferGates                   (User #9037) N/A 12/21/2011 12:21:48am

i just read all the chapters so far in this story and i love it, update soon

Part #4 - Chapter Three
LuvsA7X                   (User #10221) N/A 09/24/2011 03:12:42pm

I'm glad Gates was put in his place and glad to see he came
around at the end and welcomed her.
You have to just love Jimmy and his huge teddy bear
personality.
I'm anxious to see where things are going. Update soon! :)

Part #3 - Chapter Two
KittyInferno                   (User #9933) N/A 08/29/2011 03:11:21pm

What's up with Gates being a conceited douche?
Zacky and Johnny sounded adorable and Matt was just well, Matt lol
Jimmy waving the belt in the air victoriously made me smile, I could just picture him doing that while smiling like a loon XD
Awesome job, can't wait to find out what happens next and why she's upset over this Tim dude
xoxo

gowiththeflow                   (User #9871) N/A 08/29/2011 10:08:44am

Jimmy is such a sweetheart. I'm really glad that he managed
to win Leana around and let Ann stay over.

Why was Brian acting conceited? Fix up, Gates!

I'm intrigued as to who Timmy is and what he did...

So, she knows who they are now. I wonder how she'll take
this! Can't wait to find out - update soon!

(By the way, just a little tip - whenever you update a
chapter, if you update the MAIN SECTION - to let people
know a chapter has been updated, it will be easier for
people to realise you've added something to the story, and
you'll gain more readers/reviewers) :)

Part #2 - Chapter One
KittyInferno                   (User #9933) N/A 08/28/2011 06:33:29pm

I like this too, I love stories about Jimmy :) Personally, I might not have been so trusting to go with a stranger in his car but to Hell with it, it was The Rev lol. Update soon, I want to see where this goes...
Rae
xoxo

gowiththeflow                   (User #9871) N/A 08/28/2011 03:39:01pm

This is a good introduction to the story. I like this, I
hope you continue with it :)

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