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rayshadowsA7X                   (User #9758) N/A 08/30/2011 08:14:32pm

I am officially in love with all your stories and omfg I
think I will die if you do not update all the time

Part #2 - Sandwiches And Beer
zackyvsloveslave                   (User #6375) N/A 08/27/2011 10:01:51pm

agreed but it was a funny concept cant wait to read more

xFuRiEx                   (User #9685) N/A 08/27/2011 06:22:37pm

The idea is original, but there are a lot of spellings errors.

phenomenalalex                   (User #9584) N/A 08/27/2011 04:42:56pm

This obviously is a troll! :D And trolls make me smile. This could be better than the neopets story! Keep on with the sexist stereotypes! And keep Val in the kitchen where she belongs! To make her man some sammiches. LOL. This blows.

Part #2 - Sandwiches And Beer
JenniferGates                   (User #9037) N/A 08/27/2011 03:50:23pm

i have to agree too difficult to read through the spelling, sorry.

Lilith.                   (User #9991) N/A 08/27/2011 11:33:25am

What I don't understand is how you can spell everything
perfectly on the outside yet when you get to the actual
chapter, everything has an extra letter that does not
belong there.

Try doing a little editing before you post or download a
free spellchecker.

Make this easier to read for everyone who wants to read it.

Lilith.

Part #2 - Sandwiches And Beer
Siren_Shadows                   (User #7495) N/A 08/27/2011 04:11:21am

I'm sorry. I'd love to read, but there were too many spelling
errors.

Not to be a bitch, but please proofread and repost.

Thanks
-Siren Shadows

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