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Part #5 - Warped
foREVer97                   (User #9980) N/A 08/31/2011 10:05:57am

Wow, I love this story! Adam is creeping me out o_O

gowiththeflow                   (User #9871) N/A 08/29/2011 10:25:43am

Grrr, I'm not really liking Adam.

I really like the fact that Matt and Jason Berry are in this
- they hardly ever get to feature in stories!

(By the way, just a little tip - whenever you update a
chapter, if you update the MAIN SECTION - to let people know
a chapter has been updated, it will be easier for people to
realise you've added something to the story, and you'll gain
more readers/reviewers)

Part #4 - That Feeling
gowiththeflow                   (User #9871) N/A 08/29/2011 10:23:12am

Wow, a lot can definitely happen in one week. Her mind must
be constantly whirling, but I'm glad Johnny is there to make
it easier for her - and I love the fact that the rest of the
guys sleep with her to make her feel comfortable.

Part #3 - Home
gowiththeflow                   (User #9871) N/A 08/29/2011 10:18:51am

She's in love with Johnny?! Oh noes!...

Part #2 - How Do I Live Without The Ones I Love?
Liera                   (User #9529) N/A 07/28/2011 05:26:38am

How the hell did she die?? o.o
And yess, i agree, i love Zacky's hair xD
i love zacky period xD xD
Jimmy is so sweet in this.
And silly.
And awe, Val's parents are absolutely amazing.
And awe to Brian catching her.
But i still can't believe her mom is dead :(

gowiththeflow                   (User #9871) N/A 07/27/2011 06:29:17pm

Wow, I was so shocked with the twist of Lauren's mother
dying :( Poor girl! So nice of Val's parents to adopt her
though... Jimmy is awesome ^_^

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