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KittyInferno                   (User #9933) N/A 07/22/2013 07:46:17pm

Ok, so, again cute... But still not shipping them.. And,
uh, did Jackie change gender halfway through this?

“But I can romance you just the way I did when we were 18
and running around on the beach at night.” He winked,
brushing his thumb against her cheek as he cupped her face
with his hand.

“You most certainly can.” He smiled, leaning into his
gentle touch.

Just thought I'd point that out to you, don't hate on me
for it ;p
Loves ya!

Ex&Oh                   (User #5929) N/A 07/21/2011 02:17:19am

Yeah, I aww'd throughout. And I don't care about the weird looks my mother is giving me right now.. This was totally worth it! :D Brian and Jackie are a great pairing.. And the song? Beautiful! You rock.. You're just amazing Gabs! :)


phenomenalalex                   (User #9584) N/A 07/21/2011 12:23:03am

Awww! The fluffy cuteness almost blinded me! It was so cute! I want to sit and watch corny movies and eat chocolate ice cream now. :) Ok, that's a little excessive, but I seriously loved it. Brian and Jackie are married! I loved that that was their first dance and everything. You should write another soon! -alex

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