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Part #5 - With Friends Like These
gowiththeflow                   (User #9871) N/A 08/26/2011 07:52:27am

I like how different circumstances lead Viviana to meet
different people. It was awesome that she managed to make
friends with Matt by saving his ass from detention!

Anyway, another cool chapter :) Update soon!

Part #4 - Baseball Theory
gowiththeflow                   (User #9871) N/A 07/21/2011 11:38:49pm

Awh, you're lovely. I wouldn't keep reading if I didn't
think your story was good or well written :P

Anyway, the guys hanging around Zack were total douches, and
I'm glad Viviana set them straight. Same thing with that
asshole teacher. She seems to have to roll her eyes an awful
lot though, haha.

Update whenever you can, it's no problem :) I look forward
to it :)

Part #3 - School Daze
gowiththeflow                   (User #9871) N/A 07/19/2011 09:14:29pm

Another well written chapter. So, she's been introduced to
Val who seems nice enough... Looking forward to when she
meets the guys ;)

Part #2 - Wake Up
gowiththeflow                   (User #9871) N/A 07/16/2011 05:20:16pm

Considering you haven't written a story in about 4 years,
this is really well written. I look forward to see more :)

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