|Part #20 - Chapter 19.
Is it too bad that i'm still actually waiting for an update? This is the first fanfic I've read on this site, please end it? :)
God, I love this story! Chapter 20?
Ahhhh oh my gosh! Whyyyyyy?! Hahaha.
Why is Brian so afraid of commitment?! Good lord, GET WITH LYNN
AND GET SERIOUS! But it's too late now! She's moving on to another hot
guy. And I bet Brian will be jealous. Oh well, that's his fault!
It's a baby! :D I love babies:) and Karl's back!
I missed so much while I was goneeee! My goodness! Hahaha
Update again!!! :))))
...Just when you think Lynn
and Brian are going to be together..
I was really hoping for them to finally
get together...But I think Lynn did the right thing..
Even though Brian wants her now..
Ian better not turn out like Brian. xD
Just caught up on like 5 chapters to this story and I love
whats happened, but I wish Lynn and Brian could sort things
out this has such a good plot line :) can't wait to read more
Wow, are you fucking with me?!?! What is she DOING?!
Ugh, I'm pretty split on what she should've done too...
Anyways, can't wait for the next chapter, and the sequel! =D
Good God woman are you trying to KILL ME?!
Brian AND Ian in one chapter? Seriously? SERIOUSLY?!
Ok, excuse me while I calm down... Maybe go grab a cold shower... Or ten :p
This was freakin amazing!!!!
Firstly HOT Brian sexy time (50 shades got nothing on you dear ;p)
Secondly awesome little baby Dale and Zee talking baby talk to him
and then thirdly Ian freakin Somerhalder!!!!
Yes, I adore the man too :p
You have impeccable taste in men :p
Loved this, love you :)
Oh...girl you are killing me!!! Let me just say that Brian
and Ian are number 1 and 2 on my "hall pass list". And I
don't know about anybody else, but in my humble opinion,
Ian would be just perfect to play Christian Grey. Just
Anyway, I'm totally split on what Lynn should have done.
my first instinct was to want to slap some sense into her
and scream "Are you fucking nuts"? She's *finally* with
Brian, and then overanalyzes the situation to the point
where she feels it's not right. But, on the other hand,
she is just trying so hard not to be hurt again, which I
completely understand. As far as what I THINK she should
do - well - yeah, stay with Brian. She'd be able to stay
in the States (where she belongs). He may not be able to
get his head out of his ass at first, but she'll never know
unless she tries.
I'm glad Lynn and Zacky are friends again. He's a total
dick when they're messing around, but seems like a cool guy
when they're not.
Looking very forward to the last chapter. Please keep me
on the readers list for the sequel!! :)
Stupid computer cut out my entire review and only left Ian somerhalder
lmao. Oh well
I think it's good that Lynn thinks of her own future. What I think she should
do is listen to Brian more often. All of life is a leap of faith so if she actually
heard what Brian had to say, the worst he could do was agree with her
that he was only hiding from commitment, which she had already
convinced herself that it was true, but she could be wrong and come out
with a win win ergo the leap of faith.
Hope it makes sense haha