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Ex&Oh                   (User #5929) N/A 06/26/2011 04:13:42pm

After living in a ridiculously small village (618 people) before upgrading to a town of 2,000 plus, I would say you got the atmosphere perfect!

I love the way the boys interact- it really makes them human, y'know? Most stories are just like OMFGZ IZ ZACK, MATT, JOHNNY, BRI-BRI, an JIMMY! DEY IN A BAND! Which gets really annoying, but to read about them getting lost and picking at each other is refreshing.

I can't help but feel I'm watching something out of Supernatural unfold... which makes me really sick to my stomach. I can only imagine what's going to happen, especially since the title is "Eat Me." and it deals with a small town. *shudder*

I pray that what I think is going to happen.. doesn't. Can't wait for an update!

-Ashley Ex&Oh

Part #2 - Chapter One
pen_and_ink                   (User #8378) N/A 06/26/2011 04:09:46pm

Well you've officially captured my interest, which means I'm not abandoning this story until you've finished it! =] Awesome start, a really solid first chapter. I like how you set it up with the humor between the guys, and I especially chuckled at trading Johnny for a map & Brian being the extra for coffee lol. I'm really excited to see where you're gonna take this, especially with the small town setting. I'm getting the feeling things aren't quite what they seem to the boys & that it isn't just an old rest stop. Please update soon! =]

Haylie Jaed                   (User #3426) N/A 06/26/2011 12:30:47pm

So, I'm loving the start of this. It's a great way of setting up the story so we have a good idea of the relationship between the guys, and for what the scene looks like. Small towns are awesome because they're creepy. XD

I'm a little weirded out by the gas station. By the guy with the shotgun and the fact that everything in the store is faded, out-dated or fly invested. Yick. Makes you wonder what's been going on.

Anyway, I'm off to bed. But I'd better see more of this soon. ;)


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