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Part #17 - Epilogue
phenomenalalex                   (User #9584) N/A 07/08/2011 04:20:07pm

I know what she needs to do, too. SHE NEEDS TO FREAKING TURN HIM ALREADY! JESUS CHRIST! Hahaha. Come one, man! But I loved that this was a cliffhanger, because now it makes me want a sequel even more! :D I wanna know what's gonna happen next (after she changes him, of course. Lol). Are the covens gonna hate each other again or are they gonna stay friends?! I wanna freaking know! So put up the sequel soon! -alex

vampiresdontsparkle                   (User #9507) N/A 07/08/2011 03:44:53pm

Awww leave me hanging! I hope she turns him! I can't wait for the sequel! This story was the best!

WishxOnxAxStar                   (User #9127) N/A 07/08/2011 03:42:26am

Noooooo. I need more that was such a bad ending i need more. I
cant wait for more I hope that she changed him. Ahhh more
please more.

WishxOnxAxStar                   (User #9127) N/A 07/08/2011 03:42:24am

Noooooo. I need more that was such a bad ending i need more. I
cant wait for more I hope that she changed him. Ahhh more
please more.

Part #16 - Now Your Nightmare Comes To Life...
phenomenalalex                   (User #9584) N/A 07/07/2011 11:51:40pm

Turn him! TUUUURN HIM! Zacky needs to be a vampire so that he can be with Marissa forever! NOW! Oh jeez! I hope he's alright, cuz I'll be pissed. Hahah. And they beat Ray! Well, Marissa beat Ray. :D I can't wait for the epilogue! I wanna see what's happening with all the couples, covens, and ZACKY! Update again soon! -alex

vampiresdontsparkle                   (User #9507) N/A 07/07/2011 09:29:46pm

Yes, Raymond is no more!

But poor Zacky, will he be changed??

more soon! amazing chapter!

WishxOnxAxStar                   (User #9127) N/A 07/07/2011 09:15:31pm

Wow that was a great chapter I hope that Zack lives. I am glad
that we killed Raymond. I hope that you can update again
shortly because of the fact I like to pick on Alyssa because she
hasn't read them. And because i eventually told her that i would i
have to do this. This is for Alyssa. We stole your pet, we stole
your pet, we stole your pet and I'm older.

Part #15 - What Would You Do For The One You Love?
phenomenalalex                   (User #9584) N/A 07/06/2011 07:54:43pm

Heeeeeey, Ray! Hahah. He's a jerk. I can't believe he did that to Zacky! Actually, yes I can. He's a dickhead and I don't like him. I seriously hope that Matt and Syn can give him more of a reason to be scared of them. Yes!! :D Update again soon! -alex

D Christ                   (User #9826) N/A 07/06/2011 07:18:38pm

OMG!!!!! You have to update!!!! I need to know what
happens next!!!! I swear if Ray hurts anyone I will
rip his head off!!!! Update before I end up hurting
someone!!!!

WishxOnxAxStar                   (User #9127) N/A 07/06/2011 06:37:12pm

uhoh this could be bad. I hope that everyone comes out to help.
But something tells me that something bad is going to happen. i
cant wait for the battle.

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