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Part #10 - Sex And...Mental Illness?
Lips_of_Deceit03                   (User #10523) N/A 04/28/2012 08:36:59pm

This was one of the first stories I ever read on this site. Its hellas good! You should def continue on. :)

AfterlifeQueen                   (User #10014) N/A 04/28/2012 04:36:05pm

Woohoo! Great news hon! Have liked this story and am
extremely excited to see more. =)

Part #10 - Sex And...Mental Illness?
Tierney6661                   (User #10230) N/A 08/15/2011 01:00:50am

OMG, I just started reading this story today, and it's ace! I
love it!!! Brian's fucking mental, which is funny as hell,
and Zee is sooo adorable, and yet a sexy player.You kind of
have to love Zee... haha :) I'm so hoping she tells Matt to
fuck off! LOL ^_^ and I LOVE that Emma loves baseball, it's
fantastic! I can't wait for the next update!!!

gowiththeflow                   (User #9871) N/A 08/12/2011 01:10:50pm

Brian's mental illness really made me laugh - after sex
syndrome... ahahahaha. I love it though :D!

CutieMcfoREVer                   (User #7197) N/A 08/12/2011 11:01:12am

haha Brian has a mental illnes? :P That's cool... :)
I'd love to see how that turns out in the long run.

Can't wait for the next update! :D

Part #9 - Sugar Cube
CutieMcfoREVer                   (User #7197) N/A 08/10/2011 12:34:34pm

Oh wow that was hot!
Damn you can sure write a scene! :P
Well it's either that or I'm getting too worked up from the alcohol that I've been drinking...
Either way! That was hot!

I wonder what the girls are going to do now...

gowiththeflow                   (User #9871) N/A 08/08/2011 08:39:49pm

Okay. THAT WAS FUCKING HOT! Eh erm... *composes self*

What the hell does Michelle want? Update soon, I can't wait
to find out!

Part #8 - Burnt Out
gowiththeflow                   (User #9871) N/A 08/08/2011 04:13:45pm

Just want to say.. The last chapter where Brian fingered
Page - that was shit hot! Still hating Matt. Steadily
feeling inclined to hate Zacky too.. Dude he needs to stop
messing with Emma's head for his own selfish reasons. She
should be with Jimmy, cause he's simply a sweetheart :D oh
and Brian's a tease - but I like that :P update soooon!

Part #6 - Crimson And Clover
gowiththeflow                   (User #9871) N/A 08/07/2011 10:34:31am

Wow, I cannot fathom how
much I love this story. So
glad you updated quickly,
but now I want the next
chapter as equally fast
please! XD

I'm not liking Matt
anymore.. He's thinking of
Emma way too much like she's
his property... And the
ending of the chapter! O_o
waaaaaah! I hope Zacky kicks
his ass!

It does like a bit of a game
to the boys - but I reckon
Zacky actually has some
genuine feelings for Emma,
whereas to Matt she seems
like a bit of meat.

I hope Page and Brian make
it official!

CutieMcfoREVer                   (User #7197) N/A 08/07/2011 07:43:48am

Hang on...
Zacky and Matt are just using her to see who can get the girl? Or do they really both like her.
Hmm. They're being dicks if they are jsut using her.

Oh gosh I just loved this chapter!
Can't wait for more!

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