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Part #7 - Denial
rayshadowsA7X                   (User #9758) N/A 10/24/2011 01:17:40am

Loved this chapter :) I think Jimmy would be able to teach
Sarah how to have fun :P

Part #6 - Party Time (part 2)
rayshadowsA7X                   (User #9758) N/A 10/16/2011 01:26:02pm

Ouuu, Sarah's in trouble :o this was an AWESOME chapter, i
can't wait to see what happens with Sarah and Brian too :3

Part #4 - New Creation
rayshadowsA7X                   (User #9758) N/A 07/26/2011 11:21:29pm

OMG PLEASEPLEASEPLEASE KEEP WRITING THIS OR I THINK I MIGHT
DIE

Mignun                   (User #9986) N/A 05/27/2011 09:29:21pm

So, umm...I need to ask you to update. I have no idea why,
but I would like you to.

Part #3 - Random People
SynfulAngel                   (User #9821) N/A 05/27/2011 01:07:19am

My. This is really good. :3 You should update s'more. :D
I love the story!
And your grammar is perfect.

Mignun                    (ANONYMOUS) N/A 05/26/2011 01:30:37am

I must say, Ms. Marianne, you have me hooked. You know I
dislike band stories greatly, but your writing has gotten
much better over the course I have met you!

There's flow and everything. There's no misspelling nor
grammatical problems.

I love it and wish you continue it (whether e-mailing me in
advance or not).

Your Favorite Buddy,
Dani

Part #2 - Shithead, Brian And Frida
SynfulAngel                   (User #9821) N/A 05/25/2011 03:41:49am

I'm lovin this. Do continue. ;D

Liera                   (User #9529) N/A 05/24/2011 07:13:25pm

I like this so far =]
Hehe, i love how her & Zack seem to argue like that all of the time.
I wonder if they will ever get along?
I think usually when two ppl argue like that, it's because they're a lot alike or something.
And it was funny how stupid she got over Brian, but then when Zack spoke, all hell was broken loose XD
haha, poor Zack XD
Brian must think it's effing hilarious.
This is really good.
Update as soon as you can =D

thatcrackfox                   (User #9830) N/A 05/24/2011 11:58:50am

I LOVE this! It's so cool, and I actually
really like the character, cause she's
just so awkward XD just one thing, I
need to ask though; horses? really??
Lol Frida, for some reason reminds me
of my cousin: sweet as, but damn
annoying ^^ update soon, please, I
want to see Sarah's change in
character :)

gowiththeflow                   (User #9871) N/A 05/24/2011 11:44:36am

I. LOVE. THIS. ALREADY. I actually really like the
character, haha. She reminds me of a typical teenager, but a
loveable one because she seems to be a bit of a drama queen,
as she doesn't really have a life. Frida sounds more
annoying though XD I really enjoyed this chapter, and
actually found myself smiling when I read the part where she
was talking to Zack and Brian through the window. Haha.
Update soon, I can't wait to see more of this ^_^

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