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We*dBeLegendary                   (User #9874) N/A 04/20/2011 04:09:04am

AWESOME! (It's Stump-o-matic-girl by the way) lost my old account for some reason but I'm back!!!

You're too clever! I was thinking, who the heck would be pointing a gun at Patrick? He's just a constant victim in so many stories isn't he? ;)

This was fun once I found out everything was okay!
Well, it was fun anyways but I was so scared, I just couldn't see you doing that though :)

Excellent!! (as always)

amethyst9008                   (User #7575) N/A 04/18/2011 03:51:01pm

Haha, very nice, maybe shes camera shy, at least it wasn't
anything dangerous, other wise i'm sure most would need an
explanation on why. Lol well done! ^-^

ladyofangst                   (User #9734) N/A 04/17/2011 12:07:11pm

Why is it that we always assume the worst? *lol!* That was very clever! Loved it!

Just 2 Dream of You                   (User #6892) N/A 04/16/2011 04:15:21pm

I really do love you. That was hilarious. Well done. Poor, poor Patrick.
Though, as of late, he seems more comfortable in his photos! A quiet, reserved, sexiness and confidance. Yum.

Again, well done! I wubbed it. :3

*FolieBear*                   (User #8679) N/A 04/16/2011 09:35:11am

Brilliant! Such a clever idea!
I was so scared at the beginning! Who would send an assassin to kill the sweetest and most talented guy ever? I was sure it was the end of him!
Then when she admitted that she liked him, I thought - maybe she would kidnap him and make him her love slave? Haha, bit of an overreation on my part.
Then when the camera was mentioned, at first I thought he was shooting a music video or something! Then when I realised it was a photoshoot, I couldn't help but laugh at myself for being so frightened! I had to double check that you hadn't actually mentioned the word 'gun' anywhere! I was so sure that he was in mortal danger!! The mind does play tricks, doesn't it?
Short and sweet - I loved it! :D
Keep it up, girl!
Sarah xx

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