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Angel Alveture                   (User #8835) N/A 04/21/2011 03:04:21am

good job so far!!

DemolitionAngels                   (User #9763) N/A 04/16/2011 10:16:03pm

Okay, it has all the makings of a good slash fic. You need to make it longer; either build up the tension so it's like Gerard really wants him and he thinks he'll never get him or write a full sex scene. Extra cookies if you do both. Also if you want views you have to make it sound really interesting in the description, mention forbiden love ect and they are more likely to read, if they don't know what the story's about cause there's no description most people won't read. Other than a description people look for 2 things: Slash in the genre box and a rating or R or NC-17. Remember these 3 things and you will get tons of views on your fic. Keep it up!!
-Paige x

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