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Part #9 - Skin For Scars
Siren_Shadows                   (User #7495) N/A 05/27/2011 05:55:52am

What the fuck dude. I hope she kills that bitch.. Strangle
those two like the vermin they are. That sucks that they
don't get to meet the parental units... Where are Matt and

Update soon

phenomenalalex                   (User #9584) N/A 05/26/2011 08:43:51pm

I hope that hayden gets like a major like adrenaline rush and like beats them down. like take that suckers! and matt and zack shouldve told them everything to begin with. because they got their hopes all up and everything and they thought they would meet their parents! that sucks. update again soon! -alex

Part #8 - Vioces Of Violence
Siren_Shadows                   (User #7495) N/A 05/22/2011 05:59:54am

i do wish that there would be an update


phenomenalalex                   (User #9584) N/A 05/11/2011 01:23:59am

Ok, i want to know what their birthright is and everything that's going to happen when they become the rulers of heaven and hell. and everything that matt and zack haven't told them! and i hope that they get to meet their parents! i mean, they've never gotten to meet them!! so i hope they can! i cant wait for the next chapter! update again as soon as you can!! -alex

zackyvsloveslave                   (User #6375) N/A 05/10/2011 06:24:13am

wow that was so good! im glad i was up for this( couldnt
sleep just saw the so far away video and im in tears )but
yeah update soon!

Siren_Shadows                   (User #7495) N/A 05/10/2011 04:49:57am

Yay! You should both torture matt and zacky if they don't talk. It
might not work, but its worth a shot.

Part #7 - A/N
Siren_Shadows                   (User #7495) N/A 05/09/2011 06:31:39am

I hope you really don't lose your inspiration. Maybe rage
and anger and the like can be expressed in your stories.

Believe me, there is nothing in this world that sucks more
than having your boyfriend cheat... except maybe having
your husband cheat.

The plus side: 1.) Now you know exactly what kind of person
he is. You'll be able to avoid him later.
2.) He'll probably get herpes or herpagonasyphalitis (yes,
i made it up. It makes him grow third nipples that look
like pepperonis, all over his body and his testicles fall
And 3.) It just means that life is going to send you
someone better... It just needed a way to free you up.
Everything happens for a reason.

If you need anything, i don't mind talkin. I had a
boyfriend who cheated on me twice. Once with a friend, and
the other with a freshman in high school that i was
assigned to mentor. It made me tougher and after going
through another heartbreak, life finally threw me a good

Maybe he should be butt raped, neutered and whipped?

Soullust                    (ANONYMOUS) N/A 05/02/2011 05:17:14am

Darling fuck him!You are amazing and as for that stupid 'friend' of yours remember this: if he cheated on you then he will cheat on her.My friend got pregnant for a married man and they decided to be together..she caught him cheating on her.Moral of the story:what goes around comes around and you deserve better than that rat bastard. All my love-Stevie...oh and if any of you need to find me I'll be at or facebook search and I will appear as Stevie Rhiannon just let me know who you are

Synical Doors                   (User #7071) N/A 04/30/2011 01:24:57pm

Yep, castrated with a blunt knife. I'm sure I've said that
more than once today. It's the sun, I swear. I'm not
violent... Ha!

Don't worry about not writing.

This same thing happened to me a few years ago.
I wanted to nail his dick to a wall.
Instead, my family sent him to hospital after a brutal
beating which I was not part of, sadly.

Fuck him. Not literally. If he couldn't see the amazing
person that you are then he's not worth your time.
I know how hard it is. Because I broke up with my boyfriend
not so long ago for treating me like shit even though I
loved him.

We're all here for you if you need torture plans, lovely.
I'm also pretty sure more than one of us would kill him if
you asked nicely enough.

Just remember, we love you. And that shit's continental
around here.

Part #6 - Imitation Violence
Synical Doors                   (User #7071) N/A 04/30/2011 01:20:54pm

Nice lessons.


I'm enjoying the sun and can't think properly...

For some reason this one confused me. There was just so
much going on. I couldn't keep up to be honest. I'll read
it again later when I'm not squinting through blinding

I'm looking forward to seeing what's next on the agenda for
the girls.

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