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Part #5 - Brian' Confession...
Synical Doors                   (User #7071) N/A 05/06/2011 01:29:33pm

Wow.
You got the apprehension of Brian making his first kill,
the feelings he's got towards Alex and the fear that she
has towards him, knowing what he's there to do.

It's safe to say that my mouth was open throughout this
chapter.

Brian seems just as frightened as Alex. That's good. I
guess. I'm kinda hoping he'll just let her go. Or run away
with her. Or that they will all do that. Yeah. They should
let the girls live.

And we should get another update =D
Cause you're awesome and I need more.

Synderella_Vengeance                   (User #8993) N/A 05/05/2011 06:38:26am

I just read all of the chapters you've posted so far, and I have to say, I love it! Got the idea from Repo! The Genetic Opera right? Kick ass movie. Can't wait to read more of this, it's great!

WishxOnxAxStar                   (User #9127) N/A 05/05/2011 03:34:13am

Amazing chapter I cant wait to see what happens to the rest of
us that are there. I wonder if they are going to be able to hurt us
even a little bit. I cant wait for more. Please please please update
this soon.

Part #4 - Letting Go
WishxOnxAxStar                   (User #9127) N/A 04/14/2011 06:29:43am

Please please update this soon. Please.

WishxOnxAxStar                   (User #9127) N/A 04/09/2011 05:38:17am

You need to update I cant wait to see what happens.

WishxOnxAxStar                   (User #9127) N/A 03/23/2011 11:49:50pm

LOVE IT!!!!!! I can't wait for the next chapter I think that
it will be amazing. I cant wait to see how the guys feel
about the girls. Yay can't wait.

Synical Doors                   (User #7071) N/A 03/22/2011 01:34:04pm

Ooh, interesting.
I don't know what's going on. Which is strange because I can
usually guess what's going to happen.
The violent grabbings of the girls made me think that they'll
do their jobs anyway, but then you get insight into their
minds and they're all reluctant to do it!
I love this!
Can't wait for more.

KaseyMarie                    (ANONYMOUS) N/A 03/22/2011 03:49:08am

oooh no! Their plan is kicking in. I hope they really feel as strongly as they do, and dont kill the girls. Update soon!! the suspense is killing me!

HarleyVengeance                   (User #7909) N/A 03/22/2011 03:48:15am

I loved it! And I'm really glad you updated! :D

And poor Matt :'(

It was a looovely chapter, hun(: I hope you can update sooon

Part #3 - Falling Out
girheartstacos                   (User #9309) N/A 03/21/2011 05:07:28am

heeey! I like this story so far. I cAnt wait to see
where it goes, update soon!!

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