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*FolieBear*                   (User #8679) N/A 03/15/2011 06:47:00am

Wow! That was so intense! I wasn't expecting that ending at all.
Amazing descriptions - both heart warming and heart wrenching!
And the eggshell thing was quite ingenius. I loved it!
I don't even read very much MCR, so your story is automatically special! Hehe :D
I'm very glad Sassy convinced you to put this up. You have no need to doubt yourself! You obviously have talent!
She's good at encouraging posts from people isn't she? She convinced me to do my first post (and plenty after that as well!).
Anyhoo, I hope to read more of your stuff in future! Well done!
Sarah xx

Sassy                   (User #8175) N/A 03/13/2011 06:33:02pm

That was astounding! The way you built up the tension was incredible
and I absolutely love the eggshell metaphor - so clever and so very true!
You really do think the story is going to go one way and then the ending
is such a shock it makes your eyes pop out, but it fits so well, you
almost wonder why it's such a surprise! Sheer genius! That has quite
literally made my day!

I really hope there will be more from you to read in the future!
Sas x

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