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Part #12 - Chapter 11
Built For Syn                   (User #8500) N/A 10/12/2011 07:24:59pm

Hey,
Wow, I loved this story (:
Each chapter was short and sweet but also perfect, not too much, not too little,
The story line was moved along and the jumps between the past and future fitted very well.
And I loved the ending, I thought it rounded the story off well and left it in a great way :D

Part #10 - Chapter 9
thatcrackfox                   (User #9830) N/A 04/25/2011 05:41:30pm

Agh reading this made me want to
slap a bitch! and by 'bitch' I of course
mean Brian. He's so rude, and I'm so
not happy with him! Love this btw, its
super cute, and such a good storyline!
I just read it all now ^^ update soon as
please? (:

Siren_Shadows                   (User #7495) N/A 04/25/2011 05:45:35am

This is sad, i'm in college and still giggle at the mention
of the words "balls" and "nuts"... i guess there's no hope
for me.

And man, Brian's sooo selfish. If a person doesn't want you
to have a better future, then they shouldn't be in it.

Part #7 - Chapter 6
Siren_Shadows                   (User #7495) N/A 04/24/2011 07:04:20am

Something about this chapter reminds me of poetry. I know you
said it is based on a romance novel, so that could be it.

There is something odd about the use of the word "balls"
though...Maybe because it makes me laugh and therefore breaks
the mood?

Part #9 - Chapter 8
Siren_Shadows                   (User #7495) N/A 04/24/2011 07:02:37am

This is interesting. I don't really know what to say about
the story as a whole, but i'm interested to see it come to
fruition.

I read the story in an epic narrator voice in my head. XD

Part #6 - Chapter 5
Hallie Vengeance                   (User #8309) N/A 03/12/2011 12:06:23am

Wow wow wow wow wow wow wowowoowoowowowowowowowow!!!!!!!
I LOOOOVEEEEE IIIITTTTT!!!!
Hahahaha I sounded like a Brian fangirl for the first time in 4 years....
Wow...
That was soooo weird!
Hahahah I do love Bri but my fangirlness stays with my dear, sweet, full lipped, peirced, tattooed, teddybear...
God I looove zack haha
But great great great story hun, keep up the good work!

Part #4 - Chapter 3
Synical Doors                   (User #7071) N/A 03/08/2011 12:31:30pm

I'm actually really excited about this.
I want to know what the stranger has to do with everything.
She's obviously a part of his past, but why is she invading
his future? And on his wedding day!
Oh dear...
I can't wait for your update =D

Part #3 - Chapter 2
Liera                   (User #9529) N/A 03/08/2011 05:57:32am

Uh oooh, this isn't going to be good O.O

Part #2 - Chapter 1
Liera                   (User #9529) N/A 03/08/2011 05:53:03am

O la la la, is he about to get married?
I can imagine him in that with his hair spiked up and everything.
M-m sexy XD

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