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*FolieBear*                   (User #8679) N/A 02/17/2011 03:26:30am

Hey, no need to feel bad about not updating. Those are some perfectly valid reasons for not writing (better than my ones in fact!), and I hope you're feeling better.
Definitely agree with Sas! The ameteur photogs seeing everything was a great idea!
I'm so worried about Joe! Will Malcolm hurt him?
How do you do that? Have a chapter that's terrifying AND funny at the same time!
And, I have to agree with Sassy AGAIN, that the line about the pain of the building was absolutely brilliant!
Oh, and don't worry about the length of this one - it's about quality, not quantity, right?

I hope you can find more time for your writing. It was great to see this updated! And if you are finding it difficult to progress, a one shot or short story on the side can always help you think clearly (as well as being a lot of fun!).
I look forward to your next chapter!
Sarah xx

Stump-o-matic-girl                   (User #7189) N/A 02/15/2011 09:48:35am

LOL @ Andy "Thanks for liking us" ha ha ha.
Dude(tte) you don't have to apologize for the stall in updates... It
happens to everyone, and to be honest, it doesn't matter how long it
takes for you to add to this amazing story... I'd wait forever because I'm
frickin' hooked!
Everyone can get a little overwhelmed with thier own plots sometimes,
and that's one of the few drawbacks to posting it as you go. But you're
doing a fine job! You really are :)
sometimes with stories your characters can become so complex that
they take it to new heights that you never even intended, but that's just
awesome character development/ and creativity on behalf of the writer.
You've got excellent talent and you just need to try and relax and let it all
sink in for you. It will come eventually, and it will be great! I'm kind of in
a hitch with some of my stories too, but I know they'll work out.
I can't wait to see more of this develop, but I will be patient, because I
know it will be well worth the wait :)

Sassy                   (User #8175) N/A 02/14/2011 05:03:41pm

Well for someone who says she doesn't know where it's going that was
serious edge of the seat stuff! I was tense and worried all the way
Brilliant idea to have the wannabe paparazzi having seen it all - totally
inspired! And poor Joe! What is going to happen to him? Now he's
handcuffed to the cop if anything happens to him, Joe can't escape. I'm
actually sitting here and I'm scared for him!

And I have to say - this line - 'he could almost hear the pain of the
building as the wind swept through it' is one of the most beautiful I've
ever seen!

Loved it! So worth the wait! :D
Sas xx

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