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Part #12 - Chapter 10: End: To Make You Smile
Solana Shadow Plague                   (User #9269) N/A 04/09/2011 09:10:47pm

Oh my god!!! I FUCKING LOVED IT!!!!!
I'm so glad you wrote that for me. If I wrote it myself, I doubt it would have been anywhere NEAR quite as adorable.
I love Jimmy's mom. 'Turn on some music!'

zackyvsloveslave                   (User #6375) N/A 04/09/2011 05:30:03am

that was a great story!! post the alternate ending!!! cant
wait to read more from ya!

Liera                   (User #9529) N/A 04/09/2011 04:49:22am

Overall, great story.
Totally loved this =)(=

Part #11 - Chapter Nine: Phases
Solana Shadow Plague                   (User #9269) N/A 03/23/2011 02:23:46pm

Whoa! Did not see the drowning thing coming! But it was
I'm so beyond happy with what you're doing with this!
It's epic amounts of love!
Keep updating!!!!!!!!!!

zackyvsloveslave                   (User #6375) N/A 03/23/2011 05:12:50am

I cant believe brian's dad would try to DROWN him Jimmy is
sooo sweet but yeah update soon!!!

Liars And Monsters                   (User #9568) N/A 03/23/2011 04:40:04am

damn that Monster of A father For beating doubt into Brian! it Pisses me off people Like that! I hope he takes Jimmy up on the offer To Leave that hell Hole! I konow Writers Block Sux Hon I'm stuck on both thing's i'm working on But It's Up To You if you want to End this story....... Just know We love It And Well if you Do Go On with It We Will Love It Even more! PLEASE Update Soon


Part #11 - Chapter Nine: Phases
Liera                   (User #9529) N/A 03/23/2011 04:19:59am

I can't believe his father acted that way!!
Poor Brian.
Awe, ur wanting to stop this?
But it's good ^_^
Either or, it's a great story and i'm glad I got to read it =D
Go Jimmy for saving him

girheartstacos                   (User #9309) N/A 03/23/2011 03:35:03am

noo! don't let it be just a phase!
And way to go Jimmy for standing up to Brian's
dad! His dad is such an asshole, like seriously!
was he trying to kill Brian?! Jimmy is like the sweetest
guy ever, and they have to be together!
update again soon!!

Hallie Vengeance                   (User #8309) N/A 03/23/2011 03:04:27am

Jimmy you are literally the greatest man on the planet.

I loved it sweety I can't wait for some more!!!

Part #10 - Chapter 8: Let's Ruin It
rayshadowsA7X                   (User #9758) N/A 03/16/2011 08:18:37pm

gahhh keep writing xD

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