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Part #12 - Chapter 10
phenomenalalex                   (User #9584) N/A 04/03/2011 01:16:25pm

Who was the voice?!? was it brandon?? i REALLY hope it wasn't. i hope it was brian. or zacky!! which i'm almost positive that it's not gonna be. oh well. now i wanna know really freaking bad!!! ahahah. and rebecca is one freaking cool half vampire/half human kid!! seriously! she hid his scent. like a boss! if that's not kinda awesome, i don't know what is. and i think it's kinda adorable that zacky cares that much about rebecca. it's pretty freaking cute. ahahah. i'm glad for the update! this has been one of my favorites on here! update as soon as you can!! -alex

Part #11 - Chapter 9
Revenge                   (User #9539) N/A 03/04/2011 02:03:28am

FUCKING HELL!!!
HE BETTER COME OUT A FUCKING LIVE!
bullocks!
Lol, i love how Matt is so damn persistent
and just, Zack's attitude in this in general
is beyond hilarious.
LOVVVEEED ITT!!!

girheartstacos                   (User #9309) N/A 02/28/2011 01:45:31am

Zack better come out alive! I hope he does!
And I loved how Zack was just bossing Matt
around the whole time. Very nice! Update soon!!

phenomenalalex                   (User #9584) N/A 02/28/2011 01:32:09am

Awww zacky!!! i reeeeally hope he isnt expecting to die. cuz i really don't want him to. and i know brian wouldnt want him to get hurt. and rebecca's cute. i'm glad zacky likes her so much. he's like a dad to her. but a really hot dad. ahahah. anyway. i really hope zack kills that a-hole. stupid jerk. and matt is such a worry wart!! jesus christ!! he just needs to calm down. ahaha. he freaks out over everything. which is kinda cute, but a little ridiculous. :) update as soon as you can!! -alex

Part #10 - Chapter 8
Revenge                   (User #9539) N/A 02/25/2011 03:23:52am

JOHNNNY!!!! BRIIAAAAAN!!!!
T______________T im gonna cry.
I love those boys! FUCK! T_T Please update!
PLEASE. you can't leave me there! YOU CANT.
SHIT!! Where's Val when you need her -3-

Part #9 - Chapter 7
Revenge                   (User #9539) N/A 02/25/2011 03:19:33am

HEY WAIIIT
why did they laugh!?!?!?
I WANNA KNOW!!!!
>:O

i wanna know why they hissed dammit..

Part #8 - Chapter 6
Revenge                   (User #9539) N/A 02/25/2011 03:14:08am

*copies Matt by rubbing my temple*
wow...so much info *deepbreath*
AMAAAAAAZZZIIIIIIING

Part #7 - Chapter 5
Revenge                   (User #9539) N/A 02/25/2011 03:05:30am

Val!!!! lol amazing timing!
Shit, i wanna know if Zack actually did it!!
cause lol, damn hes so suspicious and I like it! lols xD

Part #6 - Chapter 4
Revenge                   (User #9539) N/A 02/25/2011 03:00:37am

Full vampire..
the term slightly confuses me D:
so what's Zack and Bri!? O:
lol, Johnny is such a smartie pants

Part #5 - Chapter 3
Revenge                   (User #9539) N/A 02/25/2011 02:55:08am

Lol, I agree with Alex and Gir,
i bet theyre vampires! BUT SHIT!
Zack was all demanding at matt.
I has a bad feeeling about this party O_O

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