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Part #9 - Double Dog Dare You
Dae                   (User #9598) N/A 01/16/2011 11:14:02am

Ooh lala! Skinny dipping! I like it :)
I do believe you posted the same chapters twice or whatever
so you might want to check on that?
Anyway, great update, keep it up.

allybaby                   (User #8922) N/A 01/16/2011 03:02:59am

amazing update.
she seems to be able to relate with Jimmy well.
i wonder if anything is going to happen.
or if shes gonna go after brian.
anyways amazing update.
please update soon love!

Ciara_Sevenfold                   (User #8626) N/A 01/16/2011 01:32:01am

Loved this chapter.
I'm a little confused to who's with who. And who it is when your writing. But it should get easier for me as the story goes along :L
Anyways. Loved this chapter. And brian in the bathroom :L

Loved it!
I wanna know what happens next!
Update soon.

Ciara_Sevenfold                   (User #8626) N/A 01/16/2011 01:32:01am

Loved this chapter.
I'm a little confused to who's with who. And who it is when your writing. But it should get easier for me as the story goes along :L
Anyways. Loved this chapter. And brian in the bathroom :L

Loved it!
I wanna know what happens next!
Update soon.

girheartstacos                   (User #9309) N/A 01/15/2011 11:53:26pm

So she broke up with her BF, and Jimmy went
skinny dipping. Niiicee. Hahaha.
Anyway, those two seem cute together..
update soon love!

zackyvsloveslave                   (User #6375) N/A 01/15/2011 11:49:38pm

loved the update i think those 2 are gonna be together.
Update soon :)

Part #8 - WingWingWing. Herro?
Faith Sevenfold (Meghan)                   (User #8780) N/A 01/13/2011 04:01:25pm

I hate her boyfriend -_-
awwwwwww, her and Jimmy :)
Loved it
Update soon; xoxo

zackyvsloveslave                   (User #6375) N/A 01/12/2011 08:42:39pm

i love it so far and her boyfriend is a total douche though

bLAdeKilljoy6S                   (User #9455) N/A 01/12/2011 02:45:28am

I hate her boyfriend.
Haha, Jimmy and her are loners. :))
Update soon!

allybaby                   (User #8922) N/A 01/12/2011 12:00:21am

loved it!
her boyfriend is a douche bag, just sayin' haha.
i love how everyone is open to skinny dipping.
i can't wait for the next chapter.
please update soon sweets!

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