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beckyvengeance                   (User #9112) N/A 12/12/2010 07:55:23pm

my mibba. (:

this was really awesome, i can't even explain how much this moved me. amazing job.

Lady Numb                   (User #8253) N/A 12/12/2010 01:40:45pm

I had already read it on Mibba and I liked it because it didn't end as one might have expected it to end and this is something I really really hurt to imagine this situation, with A7X falling to pieces and the suffering they all had to go through.... and it's terrible to think about Zacky, cause he's truly alone and it's probably the worst thing ever...I don't know how to explain this, it seems to me that until the end, Zacky has remained the same person he was before Brian was shot, while Matt and Johnny have turned into two different people, so they can deal with the pain while he can't...until the end, as I said, it's like he finds the key to live with what happened...maybe not the right way, but it's his way...I know, I got lost in the middle of my own thought, too XD
Btw, I loved it. I really think you should write this kind of things more often, you're really good at it (not that you're not good at other things, but I love drama =D) xxx

MitchLucker's FallenAngel                   (User #8573) N/A 12/11/2010 05:13:02pm

Hehehehehe Go Zacky! You kill that man!!
KILL HIM!!! oh wait he did... hehehehehe :)

I loved this! But it was sad :(
He lost his friends/Brothers one by one... :(

CutieMcfoREVer                   (User #7197) N/A 12/11/2010 12:02:08pm

Wow. I don't even know say.

Zacky must have been numb most of the time then. To lose your brothers and so closely together as well must SUCK.

Brian's death reminded me of Dimebag's death. :/

This was so great I really loved it! :D

~Rosalia~                   (User #8763) N/A 12/11/2010 03:55:47am

That was freaking intense!

Poor Zacky =( I liked this a lot it was sort of dark and its a nice change from my usual reading.

When I was reading it the reality of their situation just hit me again. Those poor guys lost their brother. I don't think I'd ever be able to handle losing my brothers. I'm glad they seem to be able to be strong and help each other. I always said I didn't care if they ever made anoither CD I just wanted them to be able to cope. I know random rant but I felt the need to get it out lol. Sorry.

Anywho I absolutely loved it of course. Because its you and you are oozing talent in the writing area. You really inspire me try to improve my writing. Awesome job!

Faith Sevenfold (Meghan)                   (User #8780) N/A 12/11/2010 01:54:26am

oooh, so good! I loved it!

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