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Dae                   (User #9598) N/A 01/18/2011 11:21:59am

Oh dear little Johnny!
Did you base the title on the song bij Stone Sour?
I love that song.

It's brilliant what you do with the commentary, putting it in
between () and in italics. I especially loved when you did
that in the middle of a sentence.
A job well done!

KChrist                   (User #9346) N/A 11/30/2010 11:06:45am

Awww I actually got a little teary eyed reading that. Poor Johnny. Getting beat on by the guys and not being able to tell her that he likes her. Poor baby :(
I loved it. Is it gonna stay a one-shot or are you gonna turn it into a longer story? Coz I'd love to see how the whole situation plays out between them.

WishxOnxAxStar                   (User #9127) N/A 11/30/2010 12:44:23am

That was sad but cute. I think its sad that they beat on
Johnny. But I loved it.

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